Thursday, December 16, 2010

Hi ... Haikus for Haiku My Heart

Hi ... Haikus for Haiku My Heart


The petals of rose
Gather in a huddle , say
good luck and open-up


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Dew drops shine with joy

For whatever moments, know
Will merge with Sun


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13 comments:

  1. welcome ramesh,
    your rose petal huddle is DELIGHTFUL!
    the second...such a quick end to peaceful dew drops.
    thanks for being here.

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  2. oh my, i certainly didn't mean to rethink your haiku!
    i like a little "dark" with my light.

    you are a prolific haiku devotee. i am saving your epic haiku collection for first light.

    i love your writers passion.
    see you in the morning, looking forward to each word.

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  3. This haiku transports me to the Rose Garden in Portland, Oregon. There I imagine roses, row upon row, gathering in the dark just before dawn, discussing the timing of their unfolding so as to display the greatest possible show to the visitors come to admire their beauty.

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  4. As always, I am honored to read such superb writing..
    The haikus are extremely good :)

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  5. The rose petal one is just so bright and sweet! I love your spirit.

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  6. welcome ramesh,
    your rose petal huddle is simply lovely!
    I feel honored to read you beautiful words my friend.

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  7. I adore the rose petal haiku -- and Annie's comment about what she imagines.

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  8. I'm back to rose time Ramesh, the petals, the dewdrops, the sun and the moments, the beautiful moments.

    Thank you, and thank you again for your lovely comments on my haiku post today.

    Sue x

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  9. Thanks everyone.. and Rebecca, your words are so soothing and happy..

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  10. Beautiful words Ramesh.

    Anna :o]

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