Thursday, December 16, 2010

Hi ... Haikus for Haiku My Heart

Hi ... Haikus for Haiku My Heart


The petals of rose
Gather in a huddle , say
good luck and open-up


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Dew drops shine with joy
For whatever moments, know
Will merge with Sun


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13 comments:

  1. rebeccaDecember 16, 2010 at 8:20 PM

    welcome ramesh,
    your rose petal huddle is DELIGHTFUL!
    the second...such a quick end to peaceful dew drops.
    thanks for being here.

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  2. rebeccaDecember 16, 2010 at 9:11 PM

    oh my, i certainly didn't mean to rethink your haiku!
    i like a little "dark" with my light.

    you are a prolific haiku devotee. i am saving your epic haiku collection for first light.

    i love your writers passion.
    see you in the morning, looking forward to each word.

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  3. Annie JeffriesDecember 17, 2010 at 12:51 AM

    This haiku transports me to the Rose Garden in Portland, Oregon. There I imagine roses, row upon row, gathering in the dark just before dawn, discussing the timing of their unfolding so as to display the greatest possible show to the visitors come to admire their beauty.

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  4. eyeographyDecember 17, 2010 at 2:32 AM

    As always, I am honored to read such superb writing..
    The haikus are extremely good :)

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  5. Sh@sDecember 17, 2010 at 2:44 AM

    Succinct thought.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 17, 2010 at 6:08 AM

    The rose petal one is just so bright and sweet! I love your spirit.

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  7. lila BragaDecember 17, 2010 at 6:45 AM

    welcome ramesh,
    your rose petal huddle is simply lovely!
    I feel honored to read you beautiful words my friend.

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  8. MeriDecember 17, 2010 at 9:29 AM

    I adore the rose petal haiku -- and Annie's comment about what she imagines.

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  9. foxysueDecember 17, 2010 at 12:39 PM

    I'm back to rose time Ramesh, the petals, the dewdrops, the sun and the moments, the beautiful moments.

    Thank you, and thank you again for your lovely comments on my haiku post today.

    Sue x

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  10. Ramesh SoodDecember 18, 2010 at 1:30 AM

    Thanks everyone.. and Rebecca, your words are so soothing and happy..

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  11. Anna :o]July 22, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    Beautiful words Ramesh.

    Anna :o]

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  12. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 22, 2011 at 7:15 PM

    first Haiku, very cool.

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  13. AnonymousJuly 25, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    you are a haiku king.
    smiles.

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