Saturday, January 8, 2011

Celestial Abundance

For Haiku heights prompt: Celestial

Colorful birds form
Flying rainbows, celestial
Bodies look in awe



For Haiku Heights: Celestial and OSI: Abundance


Spread around
Celestial abundance, and
A happy part I..

15 comments:

  1. Very nice haikus, great words of wisdom and peace in these offerings.

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  2. Haikus rich with colourful metaphor and personal affirmation!

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  3. I love the idea of colorful birds as flying rainbows! Gorgeous.

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  4. Loved the way you compared the colorful flying birds to a rainbow, Rameshji! :)

    And yes, you sure seem to be a happy part of the celestial abundance! :)

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  5. Lovely imagery of the birds and the rainbow and all that creation of which we are a part.

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  6. love the image of flying birds...

    magical word painting.

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  7. Your words make my heart soar with the birds. Beautiful.

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  8. rameshji...i loved the metaphor here...colourful birds and rainbows..beautiful haikus, both!

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  9. excellent and classic as well
    I know conveying the spirit of haiku is an art and a discipline

    Thanks for sharing

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  10. I saw that image straight away when i read the poem. Nice one.

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  11. I like what you did with the haiku
    a spirited piece

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  12. I can see the wisdom that flows in you..nice haiku

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  13. Dear Ramesh
    The connection with birds and celestial bodies was perfectly done. The second one was good too... thanks for sharing...

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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