Saturday, January 8, 2011

Celestial Abundance

For Haiku heights prompt: Celestial

Colorful birds form
Flying rainbows, celestial
Bodies look in awe


For Haiku Heights: Celestial and OSI: Abundance


Spread around
Celestial abundance, and
A happy part I..

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15 comments:

  1. LeiffyVJanuary 8, 2011 at 10:37 PM

    Very nice haikus, great words of wisdom and peace in these offerings.

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  2. Gemma WisemanJanuary 9, 2011 at 2:29 AM

    Haikus rich with colourful metaphor and personal affirmation!

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  3. Sherri B.January 9, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    I love the idea of colorful birds as flying rainbows! Gorgeous.

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  4. RumyaJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:39 AM

    Loved the way you compared the colorful flying birds to a rainbow, Rameshji! :)

    And yes, you sure seem to be a happy part of the celestial abundance! :)

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  5. NankaJanuary 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    Lovely imagery of the birds and the rainbow and all that creation of which we are a part.

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    love the image of flying birds...

    magical word painting.

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  7. lizziviggiJanuary 10, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    Your words make my heart soar with the birds. Beautiful.

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  8. PremaJanuary 10, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    rameshji...i loved the metaphor here...colourful birds and rainbows..beautiful haikus, both!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    Lovely well rounded haikus!

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 1:39 PM

    This is your niche.

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  11. moondustwriterJanuary 10, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    excellent and classic as well
    I know conveying the spirit of haiku is an art and a discipline

    Thanks for sharing

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  12. Nithin RSJanuary 10, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    I saw that image straight away when i read the poem. Nice one.

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  13. Kodjo DeynooJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    I like what you did with the haiku
    a spirited piece

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  14. Uma AnandaneJanuary 11, 2011 at 7:49 AM

    I can see the wisdom that flows in you..nice haiku

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  15. Shashidhar SharmaJanuary 13, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    Dear Ramesh
    The connection with birds and celestial bodies was perfectly done. The second one was good too... thanks for sharing...

    Shashi
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