Saturday, January 8, 2011

Where Am I ?

Thanks to Geraldine for OSI's 150th Prompt : Abundnace

It took me to unknown somewhere..


Where Am I ?


I sit,
Senses shut, God
Keeps distance…

I do
With humility
God smiles

I receive
With gratitude
God is near

I give
With generosity
God touches

I live
Just being
God dwells in me..

My breathe
Is Prayer, God and I
Become one…

Knowing brings
Joy and happiness
In abundance..

I flow,
World dissolves
Where am I?

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28 comments:

  1. anthonynorthJanuary 9, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    Beautifully done. Where are we, indeed.

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  2. anupamaJanuary 9, 2011 at 3:02 AM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    Introspection is a must for all.Prayers give strength to mind.We should know where we stand.
    Thought provoking verses,friend.
    Wishing you a wonderful evening,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  3. Sherri B.January 9, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    Wonderful poem...yes, when our senses are shut, nothing can get in. Beautiful words - thank you for sharing!

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:12 AM

    smart piece...
    your talent is abundant,,

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:13 AM

    YEAH!, you win The Celebrate Poet of 2010 Award

    Happy Sunday!
    Come to our potluck tonight,

    Theme: Journey and the road ahead.

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  6. NankaJanuary 9, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    Wonderful and deep thinking verse.

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  7. Kodjo DeynooJanuary 9, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    Nice prayer piece

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  8. The Write GirlJanuary 9, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    Lovely poem. I love the spiritual awareness and expression.

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  9. Shail RaghuvanshiJanuary 9, 2011 at 8:25 PM

    Beautiful indeed. Do we even realize this abundance in our lives....

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  10. BeyondJanuary 9, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    what a write up... how soulfully you connected God to human.

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    Your talent's just outstanding and I love this peaceful place. Brilliant my friend oxo

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 1:35 AM

    Cute formulation.

    Prayers, devotion teach us complete submission to God- The ultimate source of peace and happiness.

    Service to the needy brings us closest to 'Parmatma' the God.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 2:12 AM

    I like how you build up the sense of God being close to you and in you. That was very moving and very refreshing.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/07/my-best-friend/

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:35 AM

    it is indeed a journey of self awareness and discovery ramesh- you did well! here’s my new year potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/

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  15. HopeJanuary 10, 2011 at 6:45 AM

    very nicely expressed!
    thank you

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    Allowing God to be in constant communion... yes... that is the key. You have an inspiring way of sharing... Thanks for a needed Monday morning smile!

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    Always a joy to find your thoughts. Thank you ! Please have a good Tuesday.

    daily athens

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  18. LynJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:08 PM

    True words..the best kind of blessing!

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  19. SandyCarlsonJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    Everywhere.

    A beautiful poem. Thank you. I enjoyed the deep breath I took while I read it.

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  20. AnonymousJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:56 AM

    those who look for it ...they find it..!

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  21. Ramesh SoodJanuary 12, 2011 at 12:59 AM

    Thanks a ton, every one.. love your encouragment.. keep blessing dears..

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  22. Brian MillerJanuary 12, 2011 at 3:03 AM

    reads almost like a meditation gentle reminders like road signs pointing the way...nice one shot

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  23. ClaudiaJanuary 12, 2011 at 7:56 AM

    nice when we can make god smile..beautiful thoughts ramesh

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  24. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    Woww.. your poems bring a wonderful sense of peace to me, Ramesh.. amazing!
    LOVED the end... it's almost as if you are at leace with yourself AND your surroundings that you simply don't mind where you have reached after flowing so gently all along...
    Really beautiful!!

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  25. PattiJanuary 12, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    What a beautiful verse- with such a perfect question...

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  26. JP/debJanuary 13, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    so reverent and honest. love this.

    peace,
    JP/deborah

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  27. Rashmirekha MannaMarch 10, 2011 at 7:46 AM

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  28. Rashmirekha MannaMarch 10, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    Thank you so much for bringing me to this. I needed this badly. Thanks. Yes, He's the one. Answer to everything, even to questions we could not frame..... questions we could not know could be asked.

    Thanks a lot.

    Regards

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