Saturday, January 8, 2011

Where Am I ?

Thanks to Geraldine for OSI's 150th Prompt : Abundnace

It took me to unknown somewhere..


Where Am I ?


I sit,
Senses shut, God
Keeps distance…

I do
With humility
God smiles

I receive
With gratitude
God is near

I give
With generosity
God touches

I live
Just being
God dwells in me..

My breathe
Is Prayer, God and I
Become one…

Knowing brings
Joy and happiness
In abundance..

I flow,
World dissolves
Where am I?

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28 comments:

  1. Beautifully done. Where are we, indeed.

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  2. Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    Introspection is a must for all.Prayers give strength to mind.We should know where we stand.
    Thought provoking verses,friend.
    Wishing you a wonderful evening,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  3. Wonderful poem...yes, when our senses are shut, nothing can get in. Beautiful words - thank you for sharing!

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  4. smart piece...
    your talent is abundant,,

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  5. YEAH!, you win The Celebrate Poet of 2010 Award

    Happy Sunday!
    Come to our potluck tonight,

    Theme: Journey and the road ahead.

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  6. Wonderful and deep thinking verse.

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  7. Lovely poem. I love the spiritual awareness and expression.

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  8. Beautiful indeed. Do we even realize this abundance in our lives....

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  9. what a write up... how soulfully you connected God to human.

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  10. Your talent's just outstanding and I love this peaceful place. Brilliant my friend oxo

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  11. Cute formulation.

    Prayers, devotion teach us complete submission to God- The ultimate source of peace and happiness.

    Service to the needy brings us closest to 'Parmatma' the God.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  12. I like how you build up the sense of God being close to you and in you. That was very moving and very refreshing.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/07/my-best-friend/

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  13. it is indeed a journey of self awareness and discovery ramesh- you did well! here’s my new year potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/

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  14. very nicely expressed!
    thank you

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  15. Allowing God to be in constant communion... yes... that is the key. You have an inspiring way of sharing... Thanks for a needed Monday morning smile!

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  16. Always a joy to find your thoughts. Thank you ! Please have a good Tuesday.

    daily athens

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  17. True words..the best kind of blessing!

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  18. Everywhere.

    A beautiful poem. Thank you. I enjoyed the deep breath I took while I read it.

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  19. those who look for it ...they find it..!

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  20. Thanks a ton, every one.. love your encouragment.. keep blessing dears..

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  21. reads almost like a meditation gentle reminders like road signs pointing the way...nice one shot

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  22. nice when we can make god smile..beautiful thoughts ramesh

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  23. Woww.. your poems bring a wonderful sense of peace to me, Ramesh.. amazing!
    LOVED the end... it's almost as if you are at leace with yourself AND your surroundings that you simply don't mind where you have reached after flowing so gently all along...
    Really beautiful!!

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  24. What a beautiful verse- with such a perfect question...

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  25. so reverent and honest. love this.

    peace,
    JP/deborah

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  27. Thank you so much for bringing me to this. I needed this badly. Thanks. Yes, He's the one. Answer to everything, even to questions we could not frame..... questions we could not know could be asked.

    Thanks a lot.

    Regards

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