Ah, got late but then here I am..love to be part of 3WW
Written for 3WW Wednesday
Prompts: Surreal, Descent, Kill
Now That I Have Woken Up..
Caught in surreal
Inevitable descent,
When dreams Kill
It’s good thing about
Imagination
I can dream anew
And create a clearer
Image of a laughing
World around
Ascending again
To a happier unmasked reality
I know I will sleep well,
Now that I have woken up..
You did do it late this time around RS, but you have done a remarkable job.
ReplyDelete"I can dream anew
And create a clearer
Image of a laughing
World around"
Most positive lines and ends even more beautifully!!
"I know I will sleep well,
Now that I have woken up.."
Great life affirming words. Excellent ending.
ReplyDeleteA very nice poem indeed, enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful Sir... :)
ReplyDeleteThat was really lovely. I like the idea of a happier unmasked reality.
ReplyDeleteMAGICAL! What more to say?
ReplyDeleteYour daydreams are so much better than your nightmares. I enjoyed reading about both.
ReplyDeleteyou've really summed up best why it is so fun to dream.
ReplyDeleteit is alwayz a pleasure to pass thru and read your latest post... uplifted wings of magical notes...
ReplyDeleteWhat a great line - that you can sleep well once you have woken up..that's really made me think Ramesh..thank you..Jae
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