Thursday, January 13, 2011

Dry Flower Smiles

For Haiku My Heart..

Dry Flower Smiles


Eyes shed tears
Dry flower smiles, for him
It’s hint of water ..


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19 comments:

  1. A Bit of the BlarneyJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:51 AM

    Well done. Two emotions united in one moment. Thank you! Cathy

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  2. SpadomanJanuary 14, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    You told a whole story with a few words. You have the knack. Precious thopughts about water. Water is much more significant than we think. Good stuff here.

    Peace.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    So in touch with the elements. Thanks for this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  4. jocoJanuary 14, 2011 at 5:20 AM

    Grateful for small mercies

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  5. *jean*January 14, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    beautiful...

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  6. ebJanuary 14, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    this thought lingers
    holding these qualities
    in mind...

    xox - eb.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    simply beautiful

    x..x

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  8. NankaJanuary 14, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    Tears and smiles paint a pretty picture together. Different and nicely done RS!!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    There's always a smile coming from the flowers ... enchanting smile! Lovely work!

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  10. rebeccaJanuary 14, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    ramesh....
    down closer to the soil from the moon and stars.
    you are as lovely on earth as you are in the heavens!

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  11. Noelle ClearwaterJanuary 14, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    This is a lovely haiku. It reminds me of the kind of haiku that basho would write. the relationship between man and the natural world~human emotion and nurture of what we see around us.
    Lovely.
    Noelle

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    a watershed of words...

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  13. philJanuary 15, 2011 at 11:01 AM


    Simply beautiful.
    Sent a shiver through me.
    I guess that's the test of the truest haiku.

    ~p

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  14. RenaJanuary 15, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    beautiful as always. I've been too busy with school to write any Haikus lately, but I try to still see what others have written

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  15. foxysueJanuary 16, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    Reciprocal love, who would ask for anything more?

    Thank you for these tender words.

    Sue x

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  16. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:31 AM

    cute..

    A++

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    Nice. I have also recently reflected on water here: http://cloakedmonk.wordpress.com/2011/01/03/water-2/

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  18. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    I like this haiku! Both lovely and sad.

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  19. UnknownJanuary 18, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    Tears and smiles, dry flower..many contrasts in a few words. Thank you.

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