Thursday, January 13, 2011

Dry Flower Smiles

For Haiku My Heart..

Dry Flower Smiles


Eyes shed tears
Dry flower smiles, for him
It’s hint of water ..



22 comments:

  1. Well done. Two emotions united in one moment. Thank you! Cathy

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  2. You told a whole story with a few words. You have the knack. Precious thopughts about water. Water is much more significant than we think. Good stuff here.

    Peace.

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  3. So in touch with the elements. Thanks for this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  4. this thought lingers
    holding these qualities
    in mind...

    xox - eb.

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  5. Tears and smiles paint a pretty picture together. Different and nicely done RS!!

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  6. There's always a smile coming from the flowers ... enchanting smile! Lovely work!

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  7. Hello, how are you?
    Simply want to check out on you and offer you our greatest appreciation for your support to potluck poetry. You rock!

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    The more you share, the happier we are. Plan ahead and have your entry poem. We are open Sunday 8pm, American Central time, linking in early would benefit your work with more encouragements.

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    Let me know via email if you have questions or doubts.

    Again, we treasure your participation and would be great to see you again on week 18.

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  8. ramesh....
    down closer to the soil from the moon and stars.
    you are as lovely on earth as you are in the heavens!

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  9. This is a lovely haiku. It reminds me of the kind of haiku that basho would write. the relationship between man and the natural world~human emotion and nurture of what we see around us.
    Lovely.
    Noelle

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  10. I can see this poem in your face. Thank you for sharing it.

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  11. Simply beautiful.
    Sent a shiver through me.
    I guess that's the test of the truest haiku.

    ~p

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  12. beautiful as always. I've been too busy with school to write any Haikus lately, but I try to still see what others have written

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  13. Reciprocal love, who would ask for anything more?

    Thank you for these tender words.

    Sue x

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  14. Nice. I have also recently reflected on water here: http://cloakedmonk.wordpress.com/2011/01/03/water-2/

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  15. I like this haiku! Both lovely and sad.

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  16. Tears and smiles, dry flower..many contrasts in a few words. Thank you.

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