Saturday, January 29, 2011

Happy Moon Shines..

Written for Haiku Heights Prompt: Splendor
Also my third entry in Haiku My Heart..


Happy Moon shines, She
Hides behind her expression
A veil of splendor...


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11 comments:

  1. TweetyJanuary 29, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    lovely one...so much beauty in this haiku :)

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  2. NankaJanuary 29, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    RS!! You have draped her like a bride!! Beautiful Haiku!!

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  3. Jacqueline HowettJanuary 29, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    She does indeed, and in that deepness, how you look. But really, you really captured the moment of all existence.


    Nanka also expressed this so well in her comment.

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  4. Vinay Leo R.January 29, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    Oh Nanka nailed the comment :) A bride in waiting, RS! :D Beautiful haiku.. A pleasure to read!

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  5. Strummed WordsJanuary 29, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    Beautiful splendor!

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  6. rebeccaJanuary 29, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    indeed....
    perfect beauty!

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  7. Bing YapJanuary 29, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    mystical splendor... lovely!

    http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/01/lifes-splendor.html

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  8. AmityJanuary 29, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    Winsome and smiling thoughts...:)

    What a splendor moon gives...:)

    MY gosh, my moon is just hushed!

    Unlike you it is so happy...:)

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  9. RumyaJanuary 29, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    Rameshji, you do have a way with words. Always makes us smile.

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  10. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    wow, a veil of splendor, love the imagery,

    your words are superb.

    hope to see you at potluck tonight.

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  11. JimJanuary 30, 2011 at 5:16 PM

    Lovely poem. :) Ah, comes a time when we can walk in the evening.
    I am thinking perhaps your poet first person had retirement in mind?
    ..

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