Written for 3WW... Prompts: Thin , Grace, Jitter..
Throwing heavy words
At drop of the hat
Ah, how often I would
Make you jittery
But then isn't it happening
With lesser frequency
Now that I have learnt
Saying all that I want to
By cutting my thoughts
In some thin slices
Well, it helps, you see
I save energy
By telling in few words
And you generate it
By receiving them
With so much grace
I receive the energy too
When you call them Haikus....
I do it here ..all the above thoughts sliced in to thin pieces..
Jittery thoughts these
I slice them all thin; don't you
Find the tinge tasty..
By: RS : )
Sometimes 'cutting your thoughts into small slices' is the only way to swallow them..Jae ;)
ReplyDeleteA good way to do thoughts. Excellent as always.
ReplyDeleteYes sir; thin, sharp, accurate, effective :)
ReplyDeletePackets of energy, elixir or life.
And yes the tinge is really tasty, leaves a sharp taste, leaves one wanting for more.
Regards
Beautiful, Ramesh. You certainly know how to make the point effectively.
ReplyDelete"cutting my thoughts", this is a great line, enjoyed this revelation.
ReplyDeletelovely ilike both the poem and the Haiku.
ReplyDeleteYes, it's always best to keep it simple.
ReplyDelete