Thursday, May 19, 2011

Friday Haiku My Heart...



It's Friday, here are my  Haikus for Rebecca's.... Haiku My Heart..


My darker shadow
Scares me, how I wish to
Become transparent....




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Oh, famished  me
I see a round piece of loaf
Shine in the night skies..





Now a bit of joy and happiness....


A puff of  steam rises
Carrying  aroma of hot tea
Happy morning breaths...



RS   :)
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16 comments:

  1. Rek SeshMay 19, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    Beautiful ....darkness of the soul is the only darkness to be truly feared...
    The veiled allusion to the moon was exquisite.

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  2. SusannahMay 20, 2011 at 2:11 AM

    Just beautiful! :-)

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  3. rebeccaMay 20, 2011 at 8:44 AM

    good morning ramesh,
    so glad you are here with your word smiting gifts.

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  4. Kim MailhotMay 20, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    A lovely balance of darkness and light. Oh to achieve that everyday ! ;)
    Happy Friday !

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  5. Dawn ElliottMay 20, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    I enjoyed reading your variety today...most likely we can all relate to the shadow within...and to the happiness of that "puff of steam" from our morning's delight. Beautiful!

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  6. trishaMay 20, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    loved all three, esp the last one. :)

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  7. MeriMay 20, 2011 at 3:05 PM

    Since I'm a chai and tea girl, the last one warmed my heart!

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 20, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    If you were transparent, you wouldn't have a shadow! :-)

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  9. Fran aka RedondowriterMay 20, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    I just love how each week you give us a little series of haikus--and they always speak to my heart.

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  10. UnknownMay 20, 2011 at 7:30 PM

    I love the idea of transparency leaving no shadow.

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  11. foxysueMay 21, 2011 at 12:24 AM

    Transparency scares
    happy to see my shadow
    though not the real me!

    Happy weekend Ramesh,

    Sue x

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  12. A Bit of the BlarneyMay 21, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    Oh, how I like your illusion to the moon in your second haiku...And finally the hot tea beckons! Thank you for your visit and kind words! Cathy

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  13. gmaMay 21, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    As always I enjoy my visits here Ramesh. Thought provoking.susedi

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  14. Margaret PangertMay 21, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    Hi Ramesh~ Those dark hours before dawn sometimes bring the most angst and fear. Even a hallunication such as a piece of bread in the sky. Then morning comes and brings us back to "earth" and the happy, familiar pattern of daily life. Great progression, great haiku!

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  15. Someone is SpecialMay 21, 2011 at 8:46 PM

    beautiful Rameshji..

    Someone is Special

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  16. Rashmirekha MannaMay 24, 2011 at 6:00 AM

    The first one is like listening to a beautified, perfected echo...


    For the second one... I would say... that particular loaf..makes me forget all the laden tables on earth and go to a place where there would be only that one round loaf




    The third one is warm, comforting, reminds me of chilly rainy mornings, enlivening.


    Thank you so much sir

    Regards

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