Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Damp Roads of Heart... 3WW



Written for 3WW... Incensed, Damp, Skid

A Haiku this time too....


Don't get incensed
One skids on damp roads of  heart
Yes, tears make them so..  



RS : )
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14 comments:

  1. anthonynorthMay 18, 2011 at 10:21 AM

    So true, and what a great last line.

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  2. Jae RoseMay 18, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    What a beautiful return to the haiku Ramesh..delicate yet powerful..maybe all tears dry and you eventually find your step again..Jae

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  3. Sheilagh LeeMay 18, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    Beautiful and powerful lovely haiku

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  4. AltonianMay 18, 2011 at 2:16 PM

    All I can do is repeat the first three comments. Thumbs up!

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  5. SaumyaMay 18, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    it's really amazing how three very different words joined together can convey something this beautiful....liked it!!

    would like you to read me too
    http://bluestocking-bird.blogspot.com/2011/05/i-want-you-to-cry-tonight.html

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  6. Thom GabrukiewiczMay 19, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    I, too, love the last line.

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  7. trishaMay 20, 2011 at 10:53 AM

    sweet, beautiful, true.

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  8. MeriMay 20, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    The last line was a surprise -- a yes!

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  9. Noelle ClearwaterMay 21, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    Ramesh, you created a beautiful haiku with these three words, a masterpiece of melancholy expression. I hope that it does not reflect your own sadness my friend. You are such a good writer.
    Peace,
    Noelle

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  10. Margaret PangertMay 21, 2011 at 9:37 PM

    Amazing how you made such a flowing, beautiful haiku with all three words in the prompt. They fit perfectly. You evoke emotion and vulnerablity: very tender. Lovely, Ramesh.

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  11. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    beautiful haiku

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  12. tamiMay 22, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    beautiful and surprising. thank you.

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  13. GYamatoMay 22, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    lovely wisdom woven of potential chaos

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  14. Rashmirekha MannaMay 24, 2011 at 5:56 AM

    Beautiful sir

    I was having troubles with the internet..... I need to catch up on a lot

    Regards

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