Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Damp Roads of Heart... 3WW



Written for 3WW... Incensed, Damp, Skid

A Haiku this time too....


Don't get incensed
One skids on damp roads of  heart
Yes, tears make them so..  



RS : )

14 comments:

  1. So true, and what a great last line.

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  2. What a beautiful return to the haiku Ramesh..delicate yet powerful..maybe all tears dry and you eventually find your step again..Jae

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  3. All I can do is repeat the first three comments. Thumbs up!

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  4. it's really amazing how three very different words joined together can convey something this beautiful....liked it!!

    would like you to read me too
    http://bluestocking-bird.blogspot.com/2011/05/i-want-you-to-cry-tonight.html

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  5. I, too, love the last line.

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  6. The last line was a surprise -- a yes!

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  7. Ramesh, you created a beautiful haiku with these three words, a masterpiece of melancholy expression. I hope that it does not reflect your own sadness my friend. You are such a good writer.
    Peace,
    Noelle

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  8. Amazing how you made such a flowing, beautiful haiku with all three words in the prompt. They fit perfectly. You evoke emotion and vulnerablity: very tender. Lovely, Ramesh.

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  9. beautiful and surprising. thank you.

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  10. lovely wisdom woven of potential chaos

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  11. Beautiful sir

    I was having troubles with the internet..... I need to catch up on a lot

    Regards

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