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Prompt: Wisdom
I Look At Nature
Wisdom scattered
everywhere, all around, ah;
I look at nature
I look at nature;
winds just tickle fresh leaves,
dry ones take a fall
Dry ones take a fall;
shadows of tall trees lengthen
as sun sinks slowly
As sun sinks slowly
birds begin to return home;
Moon appears in sky
Moon appears in sky
without stealing sun’s glory;
flowers go to sleep
Flowers go to sleep,
butterflies evade darkness;
wisdom scattered..
RS:)
Lovely drops of wisdom scattered by nature ~
ReplyDeleteNice cascading lines ~
Your haiku
ReplyDeletemakes me think of the waves of the sea washing a beach
so flowing.
The nature indeed scattered wisdom all around.. Once again a hats off ob done RS sir :)
ReplyDeleteNice one...Liked the connecting lines
ReplyDeleteI felt like i was in a beautiful park, and then the sun set and the moon came out....content and peaceful....
ReplyDeleteLovely, Lovely, Lovely
ReplyDeleteBravo: a beautiful chain.
ReplyDelete(leaves, not leafs!)
Thanks Viv.. you did well by bringing it to my knowledge..I have made the correction...
ReplyDeletepeople say wisdom comes with age, you showed how we can learn from nature, like the way you look at it :)
ReplyDeleteNice one, Sood Ji! as usual.
ReplyDeleteSo much Wisdom in your lines .Really enjoyed reading this :-)
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you combined each stanza with the next...loved your work Sir :-)
ReplyDeletenature the best source of wisdom... as it is scattered some here and some there...
ReplyDeletehttp://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/wisdom-haiku-june-18-2012.html
Nice haiku sir .. full of wisdom ..:P
ReplyDeleteNature can teach us wise ways, if we have eyes to see and ears to hear.
ReplyDeleteGathering Wisdom