Monday, June 11, 2012

Sun Is Gone...


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Prompt : Sunflowers


Sun is Gone..


Sunflowers,
turn to look at her ;
jealous Sun;

Jealous Sun
gets cover of clouds;
her dark face

her dark face;
sad sunflowers re-turn
 Sun is gone..

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Just thought of another one:

Happy sunflowers,
all turn to look at her face;
Sun makes her shine too

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Think, think think..
what kind of sun you are in
the skies of your loved ones...your admirers..
or what kind of sun you have in your skies..

Thanks KP...this post just happened..

RS:)

6 comments:

  1. I love the contrast! Nicely done.
    Ps thanks for reading and commenting on mine as well :)

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  2. These are awesome Ramesh. I love that cascading form and in this one you have used the theme very well. I love to read how you compare the sun with sunflowers (or versatile). When there is no sun ... I love watching sunflowers.

    Namaste

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  3. Wow!...Very creative haiku....Lovely thoughts...

    Sunflowers,
    turn to look at her ;
    jealous Sun;

    These lines made me smile :D

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  4. All done in your unique style, Ramesh. I like the image you have painted of the sun being jealous of the sunflowers.

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  5. You do a great job with your frequent cascade style...I love the 'jealous sun' and, yes, the sunflower does appear to have a shining face...

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  6. Sun goes and returns, brings light after dark night, and with it's return the earth shines. Yet to bring this shine in our lives.

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