Thursday, June 14, 2012

I See Flocks of Happy Birds..



Written for

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Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..

I See Flocks of Happy Birds..


Thin fading crescent
smiles to make its presence felt..
spread of morning sky;


 
Spread of morning sky;
I see flocks of happy birds
creating patterns…


 
Creating patterns
with joyous winged spirits;
height of freedom, that!

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I paint happiness
three times, for you, me and us;
walls of my mind laugh..

 

RS:)



13 comments:

  1. How I love the "for you, me and us." I love your haiku and feel as though I am watching the flocks fly.

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  2. And I leave with happy thoughts.

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  3. Ramesh! Great stuff :) "Height of freedom, that!"

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  4. ...walls of my mind laugh .... Delightful ~ wonderfully creative and inspiring haiku ~namaste, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. aaahhhh....
    well done!

    now
    walls of my heart R smiling
    with images
    of happy birds.


    thanks so much!

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  6. beautiful words....lifted my morning gloom....my mind walls should laugh more......

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  7. such joy in these words and the images they paint in my mind. Thank you for that.
    Happy Friday !

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  8. I paint happiness
    three times, for you, me and us;

    i am singing you haiku song!

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  9. I love morning, and a sky filled with birds is a wonderful sight. Your haiku paints a beautiful morning scene.

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  10. Today, I feel like one of those happy birds. Thanks for the uplift, (pun intended)

    Peace

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  11. Paint happiness, delightful words!

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  12. This could be a song Ramesh, wonderful!

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