Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
I See Flocks of Happy Birds..
Thin fading crescent
smiles to make its presence felt..
spread of morning sky;
Spread of morning sky;
I see flocks of happy birds
creating patterns…
Creating patterns
with joyous winged spirits;
height of freedom, that!
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I paint happiness
three times, for you, me and us;
walls of my mind laugh..
RS:)
How I love the "for you, me and us." I love your haiku and feel as though I am watching the flocks fly.
ReplyDeleteAnd I leave with happy thoughts.
ReplyDeleteRamesh! Great stuff :) "Height of freedom, that!"
ReplyDelete...walls of my mind laugh .... Delightful ~ wonderfully creative and inspiring haiku ~namaste, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteaaahhhh....
ReplyDeletewell done!
now
walls of my heart R smiling
with images
of happy birds.
thanks so much!
beautiful words....lifted my morning gloom....my mind walls should laugh more......
ReplyDeletesuch joy in these words and the images they paint in my mind. Thank you for that.
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday !
I paint happiness
ReplyDeletethree times, for you, me and us;
i am singing you haiku song!
I love morning, and a sky filled with birds is a wonderful sight. Your haiku paints a beautiful morning scene.
ReplyDeleteToday, I feel like one of those happy birds. Thanks for the uplift, (pun intended)
ReplyDeletePeace
Oh, paint on, Happiness Painter, paint on!
ReplyDeleteOld Mariachis
Paint happiness, delightful words!
ReplyDeleteThis could be a song Ramesh, wonderful!
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