Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Laboured Rough Hands..a Haiku..

Written for


Prompts: Dangles, Neatly, Labour


A Haiku


Dangling thread of life
and she ties her dreams neatly;
laboured rough hands



RS:)

7 comments:

  1. nice take on the words..b'fully clubbed:)

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  2. soft dreams in rough hands..how beautiful and poignant..all dreams require hard work..jae ;)

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  3. Dreams tied in thread of life ... lovely !!!

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  4. laboured rough hands get the most out of life well done.

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  5. quite impressed how tightly you were able to pull those words together. it is quite a lovely piece.

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  6. like how you were able to bring these words all together!

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  7. Impressed in how you brought these three words together so neatly. And that you spelled 'labour' correctly!

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