Written for
One Single Impression
Prompt: Feelings
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Will the Things Change?
Oh, I fell and
My hand got hurt
You didn’t yell,
Didn’t bother
And that hurt my feelings
Unknowingly
I have given you
So much power over me
Ah, now that I know it
Will the things change?
RS:)
One Single Impression
Prompt: Feelings
Ah, It's So Difficult to Grow-up..
Your feelings are hurt
She didn’t give you her
morning smile
Ah, now you remember
Hadn’t you stolen her
smile?
By hurting her
feelings
Comparing her with
someone
From your past, last
night…
Unknowingly..
Ah, it is so difficult
to grow up..
**
Will the Things Change?
Oh, I fell and
My hand got hurt
You didn’t yell,
Didn’t bother
And that hurt my feelings
Unknowingly
I have given you
So much power over me
Ah, now that I know it
Will the things change?
RS:)
Both poems are very evocative. Well written.
ReplyDeleteHadn't you stolen her smile? Very well written
ReplyDeleteRelationships are so complicated, but worth it. great word.
ReplyDeletewell penned Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteStolen her smile is so insightful. I like what you relay in your poetry.
ReplyDeleteI really like the first one
ReplyDeleteHuman emotions are complex and we need to handle 'em with care.
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