Friday, May 24, 2013

Healthy and Weak... Haiku

May 25 , 2013 Saturday

Written for Haiku Heights - Saturday, OSI - Sunday
Shared with Haiku My Heart -Friday
 
 
Prompt: Health..
 
 
 
Morning Sun's first rays
write happiness on her face;
her healthy breakfast
 
 
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Prompt: Weak
 
 
Her healthy breakfast;
no more  weak appetite,
she loves sunrise dish
 
 
RS:


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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 24, 2013 at 11:32 PM

    stunning =)

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  2. LocomenteMay 24, 2013 at 11:42 PM

    "Sunrise dish"
    Nice one!!!

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  3. AnonymousMay 25, 2013 at 12:17 AM

    gamma rays... cancer? I am sorry if I am wrong.
    http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/05/25/ferocious-loo/

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    1. Ramesh SoodMay 25, 2013 at 12:45 AM

      Yes, I got confused..well have edited and changed the words...hope it gives better meaning now..

      RS:)

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    2. Siggi in Downeast MaineMay 25, 2013 at 1:06 PM

      Very nice...uplifting.
      Peace
      Siggi

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  4. UnknownMay 25, 2013 at 3:05 AM

    Mind blowing Haiku!

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  5. AnonymousMay 25, 2013 at 10:07 AM

    I too loved your sunrise dish:)

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  6. LollyMay 25, 2013 at 12:40 PM

    "a sunrise dish" I like that phrase.

    To be filled by the suns rays. What a lovely thought.

    Well done haiku!

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  7. Gillena CoxMay 26, 2013 at 4:09 AM

    nice couplet a happy Sunday to you

    much love...

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  8. anthonynorthMay 26, 2013 at 4:18 AM

    Dawn and happiness in one. nicely done.

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  9. AnonymousMay 26, 2013 at 11:33 AM

    I like "sunrise dish". Charming haiku.

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  10. vivinfranceMay 26, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    There's nothing better than a good breakfast!

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  11. The Write GirlMay 26, 2013 at 6:17 PM

    Dreamy words Ramesh. I love this line "write happiness on her face."

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  12. Harshad MehtaMay 26, 2013 at 8:09 PM

    Best breakfast to have! Excellent.

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  13. ClaudiaMay 26, 2013 at 9:30 PM

    Got to have that healthy breakfast. Nice haiku! :)

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  14. Judith WesterfieldMay 26, 2013 at 10:08 PM

    Healthy breakfast!!! What an incredibly creative interpretation. DEEEEEEEElicious

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  15. Vandana SharmaMay 27, 2013 at 3:45 AM

    sunrise dish,,,,,sounds yummy

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  16. Richa SinghMay 27, 2013 at 6:44 AM

    a beautiful take on haiku prompt :)

    Richa

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