Friday, May 24, 2013

Healthy and Weak... Haiku

May 25 , 2013 Saturday

Written for Haiku Heights - Saturday, OSI - Sunday
Shared with Haiku My Heart -Friday
 
 
Prompt: Health..
 
 
 
Morning Sun's first rays
write happiness on her face;
her healthy breakfast
 
 
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Prompt: Weak
 
 
Her healthy breakfast;
no more  weak appetite,
she loves sunrise dish
 
 
RS:


Haiku My Heart

18 comments:

  1. gamma rays... cancer? I am sorry if I am wrong.
    http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/05/25/ferocious-loo/

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    1. Yes, I got confused..well have edited and changed the words...hope it gives better meaning now..

      RS:)

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  2. "a sunrise dish" I like that phrase.

    To be filled by the suns rays. What a lovely thought.

    Well done haiku!

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  3. nice couplet a happy Sunday to you

    much love...

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  4. Dawn and happiness in one. nicely done.

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  5. I like "sunrise dish". Charming haiku.

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  6. There's nothing better than a good breakfast!

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  7. Dreamy words Ramesh. I love this line "write happiness on her face."

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  8. Best breakfast to have! Excellent.

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  9. Got to have that healthy breakfast. Nice haiku! :)

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  10. Healthy breakfast!!! What an incredibly creative interpretation. DEEEEEEEElicious

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  11. a beautiful take on haiku prompt :)

    Richa

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