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Tuesday, May 28, 2013
Change: A Haiku..
Prompt: Change
Empty walls of mind;
I draw your smiling faces
for a happy change
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Some coins shine there on his little harder palm; I give a smile
Ramesh, Nice haiku. Two kinds of change. I especially like the first. Reminds me of struggling to find happiness when I feel sad or depressed. Good work!! :) Claudia
I like the total change of pace between the two... the first, thought provoking, the second, an act of mindfull kindness shared. Thank you, Peace, Siggi
I think I'll try drawing for a change to make that collage!! :) I see the beautiful picture!! Donation for a just cause is a must I suppose!!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku:)
ReplyDeleteBoth Haiku are unique. Loved the graphic"king and queen of Haiku". :)
ReplyDeleteSweet thought to draw faces to make yourself happy!
ReplyDeleteRamesh,
ReplyDeleteNice haiku. Two kinds of change. I especially like the first. Reminds me of struggling to find happiness when I feel sad or depressed. Good work!! :)
Claudia
I like the total change of pace between the two...
ReplyDeletethe first, thought provoking, the second, an act of mindfull kindness shared.
Thank you,
Peace,
Siggi
What a nice pair of haiku.:-)
ReplyDeleteLoved the smiles of change :)
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