Clever, Silky , Finish...
Flames Leap On the Finishing Line..
Ah, a clever ploy
of very sweet talks;
silky tone,
shining words,
a comforting web
of deceit & lies
helps one win
shorter races of life;
when comes the last
flames leap
on the finishing line
as the web so well crafted
dances in front of the eyes
and one finds one's
soul entangled
in that very silky thread...
Ah, God listens to intentions
and not the words alone...
RS:)
Oh yes. Intentions (and actions) always drown out the words.
ReplyDeleteSo true, intention hides behind the veil of words and painted faces...it also hides behind every action playing puppeteer... But then who can fool the Master??
ReplyDeleteyes intentions should be listened to no one can fool God.
ReplyDeleteYes, one must beware of silky tones and sweet talk. It can be deceptive.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Sheilagh on this one!
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful and clever use of the three words
ReplyDeleteAmazing poetry
RS you are truly gifted. God listens to lntentions,
ReplyDeleteand not the words alone
are awesome and marvelous!