Thursday, May 16, 2013

Bridge Shines Afar : Haiku



Prompt : Egg / Bridge

Haiku One ( Egg)


Traffic chaos, that;
in the middle of bridge,
a hen lays her eggs
 
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Haiku Two ( Bridge)

 
Ah, another turn
and I walk on singing life;
bridge shines afar

 

RS:)
 
 
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23 comments:

  1. A Bit of the BlarneyMay 17, 2013 at 2:56 AM

    Such a happy haiku. It "sings" of hope-filled anticipation . Wishing you well! Cathy

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  2. Kim MailhotMay 17, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    I love and admire how you sing life, Ramesh.

    Happy Friday !

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  3. rebeccaMay 17, 2013 at 7:45 AM

    tender and sweet...and filled with the kindness of your heart.

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  4. KarenMay 17, 2013 at 7:47 AM

    Joy at every turn. I like this a lot!

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  5. AnonymousMay 17, 2013 at 10:26 AM

    Sweet series!

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  6. AnonymousMay 17, 2013 at 11:28 AM

    The first one is quite amusing

    The next one I can relate too

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  7. ReshmaMay 17, 2013 at 11:35 AM

    Your second Haiku about bridge reminded me of an old Rafi song "Main zindagi ka saath nibhata chala gaya..." love the way you have brilliantly combined both the prompts in the first one...
    I have reposted my link at Haiku heights, please take a look.

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  8. gmaMay 17, 2013 at 11:50 AM

    This made me smile....
    both wonderful.

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  9. ClaudiaMay 17, 2013 at 11:57 AM

    Nicely done! I like how you combined the two prompts. :)

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  10. LauraMay 17, 2013 at 12:59 PM

    two very interesting haikus Ramesh... they feel connected to me... a hen laying eggs in the midst of chaos... singing through life's next turn... beautiful.

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  11. carol l mckennaMay 17, 2013 at 1:09 PM

    love the ..bridge shines afar ~ lovely contemplative haiku ~ very meaningful ~ Happy Weekend ^_^

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  12. Siggi in Downeast MaineMay 17, 2013 at 1:51 PM

    Thank you .... well written and delightful.

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  13. Gemma WisemanMay 17, 2013 at 3:12 PM

    The first haiku suggest that no matter the ragged side of life, still there may be the fabric of new beauty! And love the zing in the second haiku!

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  14. BarbaraMay 17, 2013 at 4:28 PM

    Oh my, I hope the nest was protected from the chaos somehow! Happy weekend!

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  15. rallentandaMay 17, 2013 at 7:36 PM

    The first one gives me a serious bout of wander lust again. The scene you describe is something I would never see here in OZ and I have a great yearning for it.

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  16. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 17, 2013 at 7:41 PM

    The laying hen apparently knows how to cultivate serenity in the midst of chaos!

    The Hanged Man

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  17. The Write GirlMay 17, 2013 at 9:26 PM

    Two beautiful haiku. I enjoyed the imagery you conjure up in each one. I loved the bridge haiku especially.

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  18. KISLAYA GOPALMay 17, 2013 at 11:17 PM

    Thats nice! loved the haiku on Egg, that is unique!!

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  19. NankaMay 18, 2013 at 12:14 AM

    I thought one encountered cows on our roads but you have to deal with hens too!! ;)

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    1. Ramesh SoodMay 18, 2013 at 7:03 PM

      Nanka, imagination can make you picture anything...and this image is interesting isn't it...

      RS:)

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  20. UnknownMay 18, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    Very Enjoyable both. I can visualise both situations. Traffic held up and a happy -go-lucky person singing merrily.

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  21. AnonymousMay 19, 2013 at 9:08 AM

    Good job combining the two prompts. Traffic chaos and new life comes ignoring the drama. the second one reminded me of the Tarot Trump 'The Fool' as the young man strides out into the unknown blissfully unaware of any danger:)

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  22. AnonymousMay 19, 2013 at 12:18 PM

    The egg haiku creates a great image!

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