Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Shadow - A Haiku..


May 23, 2013


Prompt: Betrayal


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Glorious sun shines,
and he looks for his shadow;
she is not around
 
 
 
RS:)
 
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 22, 2013 at 4:46 PM

    Very sad and poignant!

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALMay 22, 2013 at 9:46 PM

    Thats painful.

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  3. AnonymousMay 22, 2013 at 10:09 PM

    So sad and so beautifully expressed

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  4. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 3:06 AM

    Sad to be lonesome ...

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  5. rallentandaMay 23, 2013 at 8:23 AM

    Oh..now this is a special one!

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  6. Judith WesterfieldMay 23, 2013 at 2:21 PM

    Interesting comments. I found your haiku Ramesh, to be not at all sad but resplendent with light.

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  7. A Bit of the BlarneyMay 24, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    Beautiful words that paint a picture for reflection. Words to ponder. So many different responses! Very well done! Cathy

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  8. LauraMay 24, 2013 at 4:25 AM

    longing, so hard to be with this feeling.

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  9. MaritMay 24, 2013 at 4:41 AM

    Oh my... you say so much with little words.. this haiku is 'layered' - beautiful!

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 24, 2013 at 5:45 AM

    Hope you find your shadow soon! :)

    Haiku My Star

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  11. Richa SinghMay 24, 2013 at 6:07 AM

    Wow!! its an amazing haiku means so much in such little words... too good :)

    Richa

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  12. somepinkflowersMay 24, 2013 at 6:22 AM

    {{ that Sun
    can B so easily swayed by wind & clouds !!

    always
    always
    i count on the moon
    instead ♥


    Full Flower Moon
    on its way !! }}

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  13. rebeccaMay 24, 2013 at 8:18 AM

    i love the he and she of this!

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  14. KarenMay 24, 2013 at 8:42 AM

    Maybe she has stepped into the light!

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  15. Kim MailhotMay 24, 2013 at 4:40 PM

    Betrayed perhaps but still shining his light!
    Have a great weekend!

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  16. AnonymousMay 24, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    There is a great poignancy to this haiku. So good to drop by after a long time and to see you writing so exquisitely still.

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  17. UnknownJune 2, 2013 at 1:37 AM

    Beautiful indeed! Poignant and passionate expressions revealed in so few words. Amazing!

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