Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Shadow - A Haiku..


May 23, 2013


Prompt: Betrayal


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Glorious sun shines,
and he looks for his shadow;
she is not around
 
 
 
RS:)
 

17 comments:

  1. So sad and so beautifully expressed

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  2. Oh..now this is a special one!

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  3. Interesting comments. I found your haiku Ramesh, to be not at all sad but resplendent with light.

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  4. Beautiful words that paint a picture for reflection. Words to ponder. So many different responses! Very well done! Cathy

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  5. longing, so hard to be with this feeling.

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  6. Oh my... you say so much with little words.. this haiku is 'layered' - beautiful!

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  7. Wow!! its an amazing haiku means so much in such little words... too good :)

    Richa

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  8. {{ that Sun
    can B so easily swayed by wind & clouds !!

    always
    always
    i count on the moon
    instead ♥


    Full Flower Moon
    on its way !! }}

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  9. i love the he and she of this!

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  10. Maybe she has stepped into the light!

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  11. Betrayed perhaps but still shining his light!
    Have a great weekend!

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  12. There is a great poignancy to this haiku. So good to drop by after a long time and to see you writing so exquisitely still.

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  13. Beautiful indeed! Poignant and passionate expressions revealed in so few words. Amazing!

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