Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Awareness Can Happen In A Moment


 
Helpless;adjective: Unable to defend oneself or to act without help.
 
Trample;verb: Tread on or crush; treat with contempt; noun:
An act or the sound of trampling.
 
Vigilant;adjective: Keeping careful watch for possible danger of difficulties;
watchful, observant and attentive.
 
Awareness Can Happen In A Moment
 
 
Now I am alert and vigilant,
I am no more helpless
Will not let anyone trample
With my spirit any more
I am no more confused
Who would fail to see behind the
Thin wall of illusion..
Doesn't matter who you are
A master of deceit
Or a repenting seer
Because now it is not
What you think of me
But it is now
What I think of myself
Such a little shift 
and lo, how the years flew
I learnt that
Awarness can happen
In a moment
Or it may take eons
One needs to be always vigilant
For one doesn't know
How and where
Will the lesson spill..
 
 
RS:)
 
 
 

17 comments:

  1. What an interesting poem and what a long time it takes not to be affected by what others think of you.As you said one must think well of oneself. It was a long road for me. I wish my awareness had arrived sooner.Pithy and thought provoking poem Ramesh...well done!

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    1. Thanks a lot, Ralletanda.. you made my day...

      RS

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  2. Very true..sometimes it may even come and go..but if it is real..it must stay forever..it must! wise words Ramesh :)

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    1. Jaerose, you are a kind soul ..always encouraging..

      RS

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  3. Sometimes it is a quantum shift. It took me a long time to get to the point where I thought I was worth not allowing others to step on me.

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    1. And Lily isn't it great to achieve that illusive freedom..thanks ..

      RS

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  4. It's a hard lesson to learn so they we aren't trampled by those more forceful then us.

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    1. It is hard Sheilagh Lee..but worth learning.. thanks..

      RS:)

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  5. "One needs to be always vigilant
    For one doesn't know
    How and where
    Will the lesson spill.." - Well worded wisdom.

    I enjoyed reading through this piece and I agree with the message. Good work with the prompt.

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  6. Oh so true! Love this read! Magical truth hidden in this piece.
    Blessings

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  7. Great poem! I feel there is a lot of wisdom in this that I have yet to learn...

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  8. 'Because now it is not
    What you think of me
    But it is now
    What I think of myself'

    Self-awareness is so very important. Love your words.

    Anna :o]

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  9. Great shift and much wisdom!!Love the confident tone of the poem!!

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  10. Very true Sir, may our minds be open to absorb and understand such lessons when life decides to educate us...

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  12. Loved those lines and got to read them exactly when I need it.

    "Because now it is not
    What you think of me
    But it is now
    What I think of myself
    Such a little shift"

    yes such a little shift does make a big difference. It really did! Thanks for sharing.

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