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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Oceanic storms within and dark circles under eyes... Sadness and desperation could be felt...Here goes my take on the prompt:http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/08/ocean-of-dreams.html
Did the quibbling not end RS?? Sure turned nasty!!
heart-rending tale surfaces.
It's so heart-wrenching.Excellent!
Oh.Sometimes life is sad like that.Such a good poem♥
Hidden storms can be very dangerous to the health...Poor soul...
Too much blogging and too little rest. The bane of all of us. Nicely Ramesh!Hank
Very nice combining of the two prompts.PeaceSiggi
Yes, yes! More of this! So few words say so much! The dark circles are SHOWING and not telling!Well done.
RS this is really intense!
a tempest of earnest writing!
Sadness oozes from this.
great words put together. Did you make her cry?
her situation is so well described in this haiku...love it..
Salty tears, I fear.
Very interesting and original take.Excellent haiku!
Inner turmoil always more devastating than natural storms, eh?
I really like the contrast created...brilliantly done
very original and unique.
always admire the uniqueness of your thought! Marvellous!!http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/
Oh how well you've captured her face after a cry!
Love your analogy it is perfect
This is my favorite of yours to date! Awesome haiku!