Friday, August 9, 2013

Oceanic Storms.. Haiku

 
 
 
Prompt: Ocean
 
 
 
oceanic storms;
dark circles  
under her eyes 
 
 
RS:)
 
 
 
 
One Single Impression
Prompt :Circles..
 
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Haiku My Heart..

23 comments:

  1. Oceanic storms within and dark circles under eyes...
    Sadness and desperation could be felt...

    Here goes my take on the prompt:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/08/ocean-of-dreams.html

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  2. Did the quibbling not end RS?? Sure turned nasty!!

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  3. It's so heart-wrenching.

    Excellent!

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  4. Oh.
    Sometimes life is sad like that.
    Such a good poem♥

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  5. Hidden storms can be very dangerous to the health...Poor soul...

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  6. Too much blogging and too little rest. The bane of all of us. Nicely Ramesh!

    Hank

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  7. Very nice combining of the two prompts.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  8. Yes, yes! More of this!

    So few words say so much!

    The dark circles are SHOWING and not telling!

    Well done.

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  9. great words put together. Did you make her cry?

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  10. her situation is so well described in this haiku...love it..

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  11. Very interesting and original take.Excellent haiku!

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  12. Inner turmoil always more devastating than natural storms, eh?

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  13. I really like the contrast created...brilliantly done

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  14. always admire the uniqueness of your thought! Marvellous!!

    http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  15. Oh how well you've captured her face after a cry!

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  16. This is my favorite of yours to date! Awesome haiku!

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