Friday, August 2, 2013

Rains Catch Her...

Haiku Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...
because it's Friday..




Rains catch her;
stubborn umbrella
opens not


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Pearls of water
shine on grass blades;
her bare feet


RS:)
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17 comments:

  1. HazelAugust 2, 2013 at 5:35 AM

    Sometimes a stubborn umbrella does open but not without exposing all its ribs and spines.

    Hazel

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  2. AnonymousAugust 2, 2013 at 5:45 AM

    That can be annoying when your umbrella fails you. The second one is beautiful. I like 'pearls of water'

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  3. foxysueAugust 2, 2013 at 5:51 AM

    How refreshing...
    makes me want to walk bare foot in the rain...
    thank you for your words. x

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  4. SpadomanAugust 2, 2013 at 6:34 AM

    I related these two haiku into one fabulous story. A cool soothing ending to what could have been conceived as a tragedy. There must be some good with pearls of water on your bare feet.

    Peace

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  5. Vaishali JainAugust 2, 2013 at 8:57 AM

    "Rains catch her;
    stubborn umbrella
    opens not"

    I remember myself being in this situation as a kid, and a passerby helped me out of it.

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  6. NankaAugust 2, 2013 at 9:02 AM

    With that umbrella getting stuck I'm sure she was showered with pearls!! As children this would have made us giggle! ;)

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  7. KarenAugust 2, 2013 at 9:14 AM

    Being caught in the rain can be exhilarating!

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  8. AnonymousAugust 2, 2013 at 9:46 AM

    Oh can feel the rain from your beautiful haiku ~ namaste ~ thanks !

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 2, 2013 at 11:06 AM

    Oh, don't you just despise those stubborn umbrellas? :)

    Nesting Place

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  10. kalpana solsiAugust 2, 2013 at 11:10 AM

    I have often got wet by the dysfunctional umbrella. very well-written.

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  11. Priti LisaAugust 2, 2013 at 2:01 PM

    sweet water
    from above and below...
    your haiku never fail me.
    ♥♥

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  12. J CAugust 2, 2013 at 4:22 PM

    Love rain thoughts!

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  13. ReshmaAugust 2, 2013 at 6:21 PM

    Rain is delightful, although a stubborn umbrella can be irritating. Beautifully crafted RS:)

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  14. Gillena CoxAugust 3, 2013 at 1:00 AM

    struggling with the old 'brollie' in the rain; had some of those embrassing moments, especially with the folding types


    much love...

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  15. rebeccaAugust 3, 2013 at 8:42 PM

    the last one...so intimate and sensual.

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  16. FallingladiesAugust 4, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    I see what you mean, we did think a like this week, yours is a lovely image!!!

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  17. somepinkflowersAugust 8, 2013 at 5:40 AM

    {{ with such a few words
    you paint a picture complete
    i see through your eyes }}

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