Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Empty Bench

Written for


Prompt: Late


footprints show
she had left waiting;
empty bench





RS:)

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haiku my heart...

17 comments:

  1. Waiting for some one who does'nt turn up is very disappointing. Very well written RS.

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  2. Red sun sinks
    But blue moon rises
    Nothing's lost

    RS!! There is still time to make up for the lost time!!

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    1. Rightly said, Nanka. Nothing's lost.

      Very well written, sir. :)

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  3. a story in so few words

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  4. Your writing has shifted in a paradigm way. It's a wonderful sight to see.

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  5. So poignantly written! I love your new style!

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  6. Amazing the emptiness in your words... wonderfully said Ramesh!

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  7. There’s an uneasy emptiness…but, I love the imagery!:)

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  8. disappointment fills the spaces, between he word


    much love

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  9. Indeed, makes us wonder about the void. Beautiful and sad held as one.

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  10. a story of wait and unfulfilled hopes, beautifully worded RS:)

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  11. Someone kept her waiting too long

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  12. an entire love story torched in longing, this gem of a masterful haiku.

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  13. You've painted a picture in my mind...thank you. Beautiful.

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