Join me in practising Happiness!!! Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Waiting for some one who does'nt turn up is very disappointing. Very well written RS.
Red sun sinks But blue moon risesNothing's lostRS!! There is still time to make up for the lost time!!
Rightly said, Nanka. Nothing's lost. Very well written, sir. :)
oh, how sad!
Super 3/5/3 says so much:)
a story in so few wordsCheers!JzB
Your writing has shifted in a paradigm way. It's a wonderful sight to see.
So poignantly written! I love your new style!
Amazing the emptiness in your words... wonderfully said Ramesh!
There’s an uneasy emptiness…but, I love the imagery!:)
disappointment fills the spaces, between he wordmuch love
Indeed, makes us wonder about the void. Beautiful and sad held as one.
a story of wait and unfulfilled hopes, beautifully worded RS:)
Someone kept her waiting too long
another from the master♥
an entire love story torched in longing, this gem of a masterful haiku.
You've painted a picture in my mind...thank you. Beautiful.
Waiting for some one who does'nt turn up is very disappointing. Very well written RS.
ReplyDeleteRed sun sinks
ReplyDeleteBut blue moon rises
Nothing's lost
RS!! There is still time to make up for the lost time!!
Rightly said, Nanka. Nothing's lost.
DeleteVery well written, sir. :)
oh, how sad!
ReplyDeleteSuper 3/5/3 says so much:)
ReplyDeletea story in so few words
ReplyDeleteCheers!
JzB
Your writing has shifted in a paradigm way. It's a wonderful sight to see.
ReplyDeleteSo poignantly written! I love your new style!
ReplyDeleteAmazing the emptiness in your words... wonderfully said Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteThere’s an uneasy emptiness…but, I love the imagery!:)
ReplyDeletedisappointment fills the spaces, between he word
ReplyDeletemuch love
Indeed, makes us wonder about the void. Beautiful and sad held as one.
ReplyDeletea story of wait and unfulfilled hopes, beautifully worded RS:)
ReplyDeleteSomeone kept her waiting too long
ReplyDeleteanother from the master♥
ReplyDeletean entire love story torched in longing, this gem of a masterful haiku.
ReplyDeleteYou've painted a picture in my mind...thank you. Beautiful.
ReplyDelete