Sunday, August 25, 2013

Smile Glows Through His Whole Being



WRITTEN FOR THE SUNDAY WHIRL..

fierce, filters, keep, enough, pieces, train,
cries, gusting, bitter, springs, south, out


Smile Glows Through His Whole Being


In spite of enough filters placed
Couldn’t help unnecessary
Pieces of information
Seep through and make
The train of his thoughts
Gusting at full speed
Jump tracks as the springs
In his mind get loosened up…
A fierce battle with his own self
Ensued bringing him face to face
With a bitter truth that
Made him realize his folly
The muffed sound of his cries
Meant to be picked up by the winds
Travelling north was carried
By those travelling south
But then it happens, isn’t it….
Time to tell about that one
Bitter truth which stemmed
As a deep realization
That his life was weaved by
The thread of his own choices…
His cries and tears washed off the dirt
And today his smile glows
Through his whole being….


RS:)

10 comments:

  1. Grief is such a painful process but worth the effort when happiness results!

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  2. I love this. I have come to that realization myself a few times. I think we all must if we are to evolve.

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  3. I like that his smile glows through his whole being....very nice!

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  4. Acknowledgement, acceptance, closure...

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  5. That his life was weaved by
    The thread of his own choices…

    Very true! One reaps the seeds one sows. Beautiful write, Ramesh!

    Hank

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  6. Ramesh, I like how you brought this round to a happy ending. Sometimes, grieving is necessary, so we can enjoy happiness. Well done.

    Pamela

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  7. Very powerful, and I like the way the necessary grief ends with a smile!

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  8. glad about his smiles; have a good Sunday


    much love...

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  9. You can only filter out so much. Eventually a step in a different direction may be than answer. The past should be remembered but it can never be changed.

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