Saturday, August 17, 2013

Oldie ... haiku..


My Post no.794




Prompt :Age



her young smile;
 his wrinkles silently 
draw the line



RS:)
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13 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiAugust 17, 2013 at 6:15 AM

    ....and tells her age. so beautifully written.

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  2. rallentandaAugust 17, 2013 at 7:18 AM

    Ha...lines drawn wrinkles?

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  3. kalpana solsiAugust 17, 2013 at 8:15 AM

    You have made a subtle change, I noticed. lovely.

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  4. UnknownAugust 17, 2013 at 8:49 AM

    RS you have depicted the age difference in a very sophisticated manner.Very impressive.

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  5. Siggi in Downeast MaineAugust 17, 2013 at 1:15 PM

    great choice of words
    to create image in reader's thoughts.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  6. LollyAugust 17, 2013 at 2:25 PM

    Yes, this is a great image. Awesome haiku.

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  7. ReshmaAugust 17, 2013 at 7:32 PM

    Smile is always young!! Contrast brought out beautifully RS:)

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  8. PanchaliAugust 18, 2013 at 2:40 AM

    Classic!!

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  9. UnknownAugust 18, 2013 at 7:37 AM

    Hi Ramesh, I really enjoy your blog - especially the poems. I'd like to post one of your poems on a site and give you full credit as well as a link to your blog. Please contact me.

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  10. AnonymousAugust 18, 2013 at 10:34 AM

    very nice sir.

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  11. AnonymousAugust 18, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    Oh this is super.

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  12. LocomenteAugust 18, 2013 at 10:06 PM

    This is Oh-So-Beautiful!

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  13. AnonymousAugust 20, 2013 at 6:29 AM

    I really love this. It speaks volumes.

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