Saturday, August 17, 2013

Oldie ... haiku..


My Post no.794




Prompt :Age



her young smile;
 his wrinkles silently 
draw the line



RS:)

13 comments:

  1. ....and tells her age. so beautifully written.

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  2. You have made a subtle change, I noticed. lovely.

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  3. RS you have depicted the age difference in a very sophisticated manner.Very impressive.

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  4. great choice of words
    to create image in reader's thoughts.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  5. Yes, this is a great image. Awesome haiku.

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  6. Smile is always young!! Contrast brought out beautifully RS:)

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  7. Hi Ramesh, I really enjoy your blog - especially the poems. I'd like to post one of your poems on a site and give you full credit as well as a link to your blog. Please contact me.

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  8. I really love this. It speaks volumes.

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