Monday, June 1, 2015

A Bird Flies Over.....Haiku



Haiku Horizons - Pond
shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..

I release
my paper boat in the pond;
no movement


**


No movement;
back at me stares my dark
reflection


**


I push the water
with my hand as boat trembles;
pond changes colour


**


Pond changes colour;
betraying nightly slilence
a bird flies over...


RS:)
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8 comments:

  1. Gazal BharadwajJune 1, 2015 at 3:34 AM

    A bird flies over,
    Its reflection dances in the pond as if
    my boat moves..

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  2. Vinay Leo R.June 1, 2015 at 3:49 AM

    Lovely verses, RS :) I quite liked the third one.

    Dunno if you noticed at HH, but I'm back with a meme. Not renewing HH, but going a step further.

    A Prompt Each Day: http://aprompteachday.wordpress.com/

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  3. AnonymousJune 1, 2015 at 4:38 AM

    Lovely cascade.

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  4. J CJune 1, 2015 at 7:06 AM

    The bird movement is the icing on the cake, and this is wonderful!

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  5. Judith WesterfieldJune 1, 2015 at 10:28 AM

    I LOVE the last haiku "verse". Betraying is such an evocative word - excellent.

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  6. AnonymousJune 1, 2015 at 6:50 PM

    This is SO Wonderful! I'm inspired to do more cascading haiku--thank you.

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  7. RavyneJune 6, 2015 at 12:27 PM

    beautiful haiku, Ramesh! I love the verse style and the bird at the end... gorgeous!

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  8. AliceJune 8, 2015 at 12:10 AM

    Wow. This is a stunning haiku cascade chain.

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