Monday, June 1, 2015

A Bird Flies Over.....Haiku



Haiku Horizons - Pond
shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..


I release
my paper boat in the pond;
no movement


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No movement;
back at me stares my dark
reflection


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I push the water
with my hand as boat trembles;
pond changes colour


**


Pond changes colour;
betraying nightly slilence
a bird flies over...


RS:)

8 comments:

  1. A bird flies over,
    Its reflection dances in the pond as if
    my boat moves..

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  2. Lovely verses, RS :) I quite liked the third one.

    Dunno if you noticed at HH, but I'm back with a meme. Not renewing HH, but going a step further.

    A Prompt Each Day: http://aprompteachday.wordpress.com/

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  3. The bird movement is the icing on the cake, and this is wonderful!

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  4. I LOVE the last haiku "verse". Betraying is such an evocative word - excellent.

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  5. This is SO Wonderful! I'm inspired to do more cascading haiku--thank you.

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  6. beautiful haiku, Ramesh! I love the verse style and the bird at the end... gorgeous!

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  7. Wow. This is a stunning haiku cascade chain.

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