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Monday, June 15, 2015
Her Secret Dreams Gleam..
Leo's APED Prompt: Fire
Haiku Horizons: Secret..
She secretly picks lies from his false smiles; burning fire gives light ** Joyous future smiles in the ashes of burnt lies; her secret dreams gleam
Profoundly written, Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteah .. very profound and a lovely write Ramesh. Bastet
ReplyDeleteInteresting takes, both. Philosophical :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the second one. Full of philosophy
ReplyDeleteI really like the line "ashes of burnt lies". What an engaging image. Good work, Ramesh. :-)
ReplyDeleteSo much said in so little lines and it all started with, "lies from his false smiles"...beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteThese are Really Wonderful!!
ReplyDeletewow... interesting and so real... :-) loved it RS :-)
ReplyDeletebtw, do make time to read mine here... would love to know what you think...
ReplyDeletehttp://drishti.co/2015/06/17/secret/
Cheers, Archana :)