Monday, June 15, 2015

Her Secret Dreams Gleam..


Leo's APED Prompt: Fire

Haiku Horizons: Secret..




She secretly picks 
lies from his false smiles;
burning fire gives light


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Joyous future smiles 
in the ashes of burnt lies;
her secret dreams gleam




RS:)

9 comments:

  1. ah .. very profound and a lovely write Ramesh. Bastet

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  2. Interesting takes, both. Philosophical :)

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  3. Loved the second one. Full of philosophy

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  4. I really like the line "ashes of burnt lies". What an engaging image. Good work, Ramesh. :-)

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  5. So much said in so little lines and it all started with, "lies from his false smiles"...beautifully penned.

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  6. wow... interesting and so real... :-) loved it RS :-)

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  7. btw, do make time to read mine here... would love to know what you think...
    http://drishti.co/2015/06/17/secret/
    Cheers, Archana :)

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