Monday, June 29, 2015

I Live...



APED Phrase: I Live

Haiku Horizons: Thorn


I Live


thorns bite her
as she plucks a rose;
fragrance
of her love surrounds,
I live

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Sun rise
gifts me another day;
I live
by my promise of
being 'alive'
in every moment
who wants to walk
like a corpse..


RS:)

12 comments:

  1. This is inspiring , very few words binding such a big truth of life :))) keep up !!

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  2. Awesome lines sir:) I loved the prompt

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  3. Amazing Take on the prompt, as usual.

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  4. Great take, Ramesh.

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  5. Too true. "Who wants to walk like a corpse"

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  6. A few words...and you create magic! :)

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  7. Oh, such beautiful words!

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  8. Nice job! I like these.

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  9. magical words RS :-) Did you read mine on the same prompt? Cheers

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  10. I like the way you worked the hybrid construction.

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  11. Lovely Ramesh ... a beautiful and profound write! Bastet

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