Monday, June 29, 2015

I Live...



APED Phrase: I Live

Haiku Horizons: Thorn


I Live


thorns bite her
as she plucks a rose;
fragrance
of her love surrounds,
I live

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Sun rise
gifts me another day;
I live
by my promise of
being 'alive'
in every moment
who wants to walk
like a corpse..


RS:)
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12 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 29, 2015 at 1:13 AM

    This is inspiring , very few words binding such a big truth of life :))) keep up !!

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  2. Rashmi KarthikJune 29, 2015 at 3:36 AM

    Awesome lines sir:) I loved the prompt

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  3. UnknownJune 29, 2015 at 4:30 AM

    Amazing Take on the prompt, as usual.

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  4. AnonymousJune 29, 2015 at 6:35 AM

    Great take, Ramesh.

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  5. AliceJune 29, 2015 at 8:24 AM

    Too true. "Who wants to walk like a corpse"

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  6. SimranJune 29, 2015 at 12:15 PM

    A few words...and you create magic! :)

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  7. AnonymousJune 29, 2015 at 1:39 PM

    Oh, such beautiful words!

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  8. AnonymousJune 29, 2015 at 6:52 PM

    Nice job! I like these.

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  9. UnknownJune 30, 2015 at 10:45 PM

    Ah so poignant!!

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  10. UnknownJuly 3, 2015 at 8:50 PM

    magical words RS :-) Did you read mine on the same prompt? Cheers

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  11. J Cosmo NewberyJuly 4, 2015 at 4:50 PM

    I like the way you worked the hybrid construction.

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  12. Bastet's Waka LibraryJuly 5, 2015 at 1:57 AM

    Lovely Ramesh ... a beautiful and profound write! Bastet

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