Friday, June 12, 2015

On the edge of night..

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A Haiku:


I write this haiku
dreaming  on the edge of night ;
wake-up call, this line..


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Wake-up call, this line;
two minutes more and for sure
it would be a poem


RS:)


8 comments:

  1. Oh I love this. And it is a nice poem.

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  2. Nice job. I like how you used the prompt.

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  3. I thought it would be two minutes more and you would go to sleep.

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  4. This is delightful and clever, Ramesh.

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  5. two minutes more and the haiku is lost!

    Nicely put Rameshji :) Hope you are keeping well!

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