Friday, June 12, 2015

On the edge of night..

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A Haiku:


I write this haiku
dreaming  on the edge of night ;
wake-up call, this line..


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Wake-up call, this line;
two minutes more and for sure
it would be a poem
RS:)


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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 12, 2015 at 4:32 AM

    Oh I love this. And it is a nice poem.

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  2. SumyannaJune 12, 2015 at 7:30 AM

    Nice job. I like how you used the prompt.

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  3. kalpana solsiJune 12, 2015 at 11:12 AM

    I thought it would be two minutes more and you would go to sleep.

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  4. AnonymousJune 12, 2015 at 8:21 PM

    This is delightful and clever, Ramesh.

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  5. Sanjana June 13, 2015 at 4:20 AM

    two minutes more and the haiku is lost!

    Nicely put Rameshji :) Hope you are keeping well!

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  6. Gazal BharadwajJune 13, 2015 at 10:24 AM

    cool this one.:)

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  7. M. RekaJune 13, 2015 at 1:12 PM

    Beautiful!

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  8. M. RekaJune 13, 2015 at 1:12 PM

    Beautiful!

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