Monday, June 22, 2015

Light Drizzle..... Haiku..


Haiku Horizon Prompt:   Tears

Shared with Haiku My Heart..


Her tears fall
on the petal of a rose;
light drizzle


Extends to a poem for Leo's APED Prompt 22: Light


Her tears fall
on the petal of a rose
light drizzle
reluctant umbrella
opens not
the drops of rain
shine on her face
she looks up, knowing
somewhere behind
the dark clouds
moon shines amid stars;
she smiles and throws the dead rose



RS:)



10 comments:

  1. I like the flow of romance through this poem.

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  2. Very beautiful and touching haiku ~ well composed!

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

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  3. Ramesh this is so beautiful!

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  4. tears falling in the rain
    happens all over the world.

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  5. Wow, Ramesh.. such a vivid image! and I love the extended version!

    Lori @ The Rattling Bones

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