Wednesday, November 17, 2010

Delighted Breeze, Happy Butterfly

Hi....Hiakus for 3WW prompts:
Clutch, Happy , Delight



Birds sing, delighted
Breeze tries to clutch flowers,
Happily fails ..


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Clutch the moment,
Happy butterfly chats with
A delighted leaf..

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24 comments:

  1. Jae RoseNovember 17, 2010 at 7:16 AM

    What a breath of fresh air..Jae

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  2. NankaNovember 17, 2010 at 8:00 AM

    That was good!!

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  3. Sakhi.November 17, 2010 at 8:01 AM

    amazing haikus n poetry!

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  4. Jenne' R. Andrews November 17, 2010 at 8:23 AM

    these are gentle and witty-- very enjoyable-- thank you! xxJenne'

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  5. AnonymousNovember 17, 2010 at 10:00 AM

    i enjoyed this :) still smiling at the second haiku ! lovely scene !!

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  6. AnonymousNovember 17, 2010 at 10:26 AM

    Good stuff! Really enjoyed the delicate haiku

    Shan

    @Awdures

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  7. ClaudiaNovember 17, 2010 at 10:52 AM

    oh this is nice, friendly and warm-hearted..butterfly chatting with a delighted leaf...how charming!

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  8. BubbaNovember 17, 2010 at 12:33 PM

    I like how cheerful your haiku are, Ramesh!

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  9. Thom GabrukiewiczNovember 17, 2010 at 6:28 PM

    A couple of short pieces from you this week, but each delivers full reading enjoyment. Deft writing in both.

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  10. HopeNovember 17, 2010 at 6:54 PM

    wonderful! lovely thoughts
    thank you

    and thank you for the visit and comment
    take care

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  11. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 18, 2010 at 12:47 AM

    Dear Ramesh

    Loved the second one very much.. beautiful. I enjoyed first one too..


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  12. AnonymousNovember 19, 2010 at 12:29 AM

    Sweet failure...
    Lovely portrayal of Nature in your poems, always.

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  13. AmityNovember 19, 2010 at 1:15 AM

    wonderful moments...i could vividly picture them in my mind.. :-)

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  14. AnonymousNovember 19, 2010 at 4:09 AM

    They make me smile, as always.
    Thank you for that,

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  15. SpadomanNovember 19, 2010 at 4:12 AM

    I love the concept of the butterfly chatting with the flower.

    Peace.

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  16. MedhiniNovember 19, 2010 at 4:53 AM

    Absolutely wonderful with the words...

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  17. paper-n-soulNovember 19, 2010 at 9:00 AM

    Ah, these are each a wonderfully fresh breath of air, bright and cheery. Thank you for bringing a bit of springtime to a gloomy, autumn day.

    Deb

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  18. AnonymousNovember 19, 2010 at 2:34 PM

    I clutch at your words
    Happy and full of spirit
    Singing in delight

    Both your Haikus were delightfully refreshing!! Lovely!

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  19. MeriNovember 19, 2010 at 6:19 PM

    I love how inventive you are in constructing haiku from mandatory words. Well done!

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  20. RenaNovember 19, 2010 at 7:55 PM

    Breeze tries to clutch the flowers.... gorgeous

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  21. AnonymousNovember 20, 2010 at 5:34 AM

    More great stuff! Thanks.

    All the best, Boonie

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  22. rebeccaNovember 20, 2010 at 7:29 AM

    gorgeous with delight!

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  23. Steve IsaakNovember 22, 2010 at 4:56 PM

    Fun, happy, autumn-centric work.

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  24. AnonymousNovember 23, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    i thought i left a msg previously, maybe not... 'scuse if it's a repeat comment... love the idea of the wind and flowers and a tender butterfly and leaf...

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