Wednesday, November 17, 2010

Delighted Breeze, Happy Butterfly

Hi....Hiakus for 3WW prompts:
Clutch, Happy , Delight



Birds sing, delighted
Breeze tries to clutch flowers,
Happily fails ..


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Clutch the moment,
Happy butterfly chats with
A delighted leaf..

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24 comments:

  1. What a breath of fresh air..Jae

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  2. these are gentle and witty-- very enjoyable-- thank you! xxJenne'

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  3. i enjoyed this :) still smiling at the second haiku ! lovely scene !!

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  4. Good stuff! Really enjoyed the delicate haiku

    Shan

    @Awdures

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  5. oh this is nice, friendly and warm-hearted..butterfly chatting with a delighted leaf...how charming!

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  6. I like how cheerful your haiku are, Ramesh!

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  7. A couple of short pieces from you this week, but each delivers full reading enjoyment. Deft writing in both.

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  8. wonderful! lovely thoughts
    thank you

    and thank you for the visit and comment
    take care

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  9. Dear Ramesh

    Loved the second one very much.. beautiful. I enjoyed first one too..


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  10. Sweet failure...
    Lovely portrayal of Nature in your poems, always.

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  11. wonderful moments...i could vividly picture them in my mind.. :-)

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  12. They make me smile, as always.
    Thank you for that,

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  13. I love the concept of the butterfly chatting with the flower.

    Peace.

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  14. Absolutely wonderful with the words...

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  15. Ah, these are each a wonderfully fresh breath of air, bright and cheery. Thank you for bringing a bit of springtime to a gloomy, autumn day.

    Deb

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  16. I clutch at your words
    Happy and full of spirit
    Singing in delight

    Both your Haikus were delightfully refreshing!! Lovely!

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  17. I love how inventive you are in constructing haiku from mandatory words. Well done!

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  18. Breeze tries to clutch the flowers.... gorgeous

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  19. More great stuff! Thanks.

    All the best, Boonie

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  20. Fun, happy, autumn-centric work.

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  21. i thought i left a msg previously, maybe not... 'scuse if it's a repeat comment... love the idea of the wind and flowers and a tender butterfly and leaf...

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