Seventeen Syllables...for HMH
Written for
Haiku My HeartHaiku my heart, beats
In seventeen syllables
Skips bigger sighs..
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Sun from another world
Finds Moon small as football, kicks,
Breaks foot, goes back..
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A tiny rosebud
Opens up, scared, waiting
Fingers stay still..
Your haiku re: rosebud is very poignant as I posted on same subject today!
ReplyDeleteSynchronicity at play!
Thanks for sharing.
Sue x
A variety of subjects today for HMH.I like that.
ReplyDeletePeace.
Like them all! Especially like the imagery of the Sun From Another World! Made me smile! Thank you! Cathy
ReplyDeleteBeautiful play today, Ramesh !
ReplyDeleteHave a joy-filled Friday !
More delight. I like the idea of a heart beating in seventeen syllables - so creative.
ReplyDeleteDeb
a wonderful trio of sounds and sights uplifting words... haiku my heart found
ReplyDeleteYou are a master Ramesh. Such simplicity yet powerful in their meaning.
ReplyDeleteOkay -- second one has me laughing out loud!
ReplyDeleteSun from another world kicks the moon... love it
ReplyDeleteThese are very clever. Thanks for sharing them with us.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, Boonie
you seem to completely
ReplyDeleteenJOY the process of haiku,
the way some people put together puzzles with great interest.
you string each word,
painting great visual delights!
Lovely Ku's and especially smiled at the second one and liked the third. :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing haikus Ramesh. Its a pleasure to visit your blog (:
ReplyDeleteRamesh. Lovely Haiku. The Rose one is lovely.
ReplyDeleteMelanie