Monday, November 15, 2010

Haikus for Potluck..

Written for Poetry Potluck Theme.. Mood, Feelings, Emotions..


Twice a month
Moon goes, rumors fill the sky
Stars say, “His mood”..

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Himalayas feel
Humble and bow before man’s
Height of foolishness


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Some places it rains
In others doesn’t, Earth feels
Bad, Man wonders..


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Feet feel stones
Sensations knock at Mind’s Door
Mind is elsewhere


10 comments:

  1. oh, the presence in this final haiku - wow. Feet here, mind... where? Lovely.

    Read my poetry potluck here!

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  2. Beautiful haikus, pleasant to read :)
    Warmly
    Marinela x

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  3. and you are an exciting haiku exponent! nice!

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  4. Happy First Anniversary!

    I enjoyed all the haiku so much, but I really loved the last one. I love the mind/body disconnect so beautifully expressed.

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  5. These are great. That last one sure sums up the mood of the entire piece. Where is the mind that causes so much--feeling?

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  6. thanks for linking up with potluck.

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

    award/treats for you. smiles.

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