Wednesday, November 24, 2010

A Hiku for 3ww

WRITTEN FOR 3WW.... INDEED VERY CHALLENGING PROMPTS..
SHUFFLE, ADVANCE, PANDER.. ENJOYED IT..HOPE YOU TOO..


Panderer ignores
Advancing age; she shuffles
Through sheets of dark past..



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16 comments:

  1. 'shuffling through sheets of dark past' - what a fantastic image..and one we must all do..Jae

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  2. Ooh, I echo jaerose here: that turn of phrase is stunning imagery. Thank you!

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  3. shuffling through sheets of dark past..sounds intriguing - a beautiful imagery

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  4. Ah, people being consumed by life. So terrible and yet so alluring...

    Well done!

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  5. Oh, I am feeling that one. Amazing and excellent. That last line has me feeling like I am walking through sheets of cold wind.

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  6. Excellent. Takes into the mind of panderer.

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  7. She needs to come out of the dark past.. This haiku thing is really a challenge and you are mastering it

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  8. What an imagery created here!! The old hand going through her rough dark past!! Sort of echoes in the ears.

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  9. fantastic image in a wonderfully written haiku..thanks for sharing with osw...pete

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  10. The shuffling through sheets of dark past is brilliant :)

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  11. Very clever Haiku! Your words evoke in me, sympathy and intrigue for the aging panderer.

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  12. 'shuffling through the sheets of dark past', very subtle way of showing the angst =)

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  13. Tautly built around the first word. Good one this.

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  14. LOL. almost too easy. But I don't write Haiku. My short story is a continuing serial, and these words just didn't fit for where I wanted to go next.

    I liked this though. Simple and deep.

    Thanks for sharing.

    ......dhole

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