Friday, November 12, 2010

Hi.....Hiakus..

Written for Haiku My Heart



Rocks Laugh...

Moon quietly watches
Layers of waves move with
Full fury, rocks laugh


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Raindrop Hopes..

Raindrop hopes
Being a part of the ocean
Lo! Falls in her eye..


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Tongue Slips..

Mind and tongue
Funny friends, tongue slips
When mind falters


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18 comments:

  1. anupamaNovember 12, 2010 at 1:33 AM

    Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    Lovely verses!
    I do have slip of tongue often as I hardly concentrate.:)
    raindrops,let them become one with the water of ocean!
    I am so surprised you have never ending words to describe moon!
    Wishing you a wonderful weekend,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  2. A Bit of the BlarneyNovember 12, 2010 at 3:51 AM

    Lovely Haiku poems. Wonderful humor in "Tongue Slips." Causes me to laugh at myself! Have a grand day! Cathy

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  3. EG CameraGirlNovember 12, 2010 at 4:12 AM

    I like the idea of rocks laughing. Perhaps the waves are tickling them, or maybe they find joy in the movement of the waves.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 12, 2010 at 5:16 AM

    I always look forward to reading your haiku...

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  5. rebeccaNovember 12, 2010 at 6:02 AM

    for gems like yours, it is so wonderful to be home! thanks for being a perfect part of haiku fridays.
    i am loving this!

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  6. Kim MailhotNovember 12, 2010 at 6:25 AM

    These are so wonderful, Ramesh! They made me smile.
    I so love the image of the rocks laughing. I have heard them do this !
    Happy, happy Friday.

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  7. MeriNovember 12, 2010 at 7:09 AM

    I love the gentle humor in these. But as for "Tongue Slips," I'd say
    "when menopause takes over."

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  8. eyeographyNovember 12, 2010 at 7:47 AM

    What a beaut...all of them are so awesome :)

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  9. LeslieNovember 12, 2010 at 8:21 AM

    The first is my favorite. I can just see the moon watching the rocks laughing at the waves.

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  10. RenaNovember 12, 2010 at 9:22 AM

    Rocks laugh... I knew I heard more than the waves.

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 12, 2010 at 9:29 AM

    raindrops, moon, these are all beautiful images.

    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/november-greetings-appreciations.html
    Happy Friday.
    xx

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  12. OliviaNovember 12, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    Very well said Rameshji!!

    Your words are so full of wisdom as always it's a pleasure reading you..

    Warm Wishes.. :)

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  13. OliviaNovember 12, 2010 at 9:42 AM

    Glad to visit you today again
    We treasure your input at our group poetry efforts and would be thrilled to see you again this coming Monday.
    Any poem is acceptable, simply share and enjoy...
    Keep writing, Keep inspiring!
    xoxox

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  14. Noelle ClearwaterNovember 12, 2010 at 10:41 PM

    Ramesh, I wrote a long comment and it disappeared! I love your haikus, especially the relationship between the moon the waves and the rocks. I love the notion of the slips of the tongue occurring when the brain falters, although I agree with Meri about the reason. I also think that your haiku about the hopeful raindrop making its way to the ocean is superb.
    xo,
    Noelle

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  15. NankaNovember 13, 2010 at 2:41 AM

    Very beautiful Haiku's and picturesque too!! You really are good at creating strikingly expressive pictures :)

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  16. AnonymousNovember 13, 2010 at 6:10 AM

    I particularly like Rocks Laugh – and would add that laughing rocks. Thanks for sharing your excellent.

    All the best, Boonie

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  17. turquoise croNovember 13, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    BRAVO! to all of these wonderful haikus!!! Rocks laugh and raindrops hope,tougue slips(we have all been there I think! hehe) Thank YOU for the Birthday blessing!

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  18. AnonymousNovember 13, 2010 at 5:10 PM

    your haikuz are lovely just as a haiku should be.. haiku my heart frijoles

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