Haikus..Written for Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry
Monument
Taj, the monument
Of love, loves Moon; shines
Under moon light
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Building
A high-rise building
Stands tall, bows to Man's
Height of intellect...
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Landmark
On Moon's surface
Man's land-mark achievement
Foot-print to follow..
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You have an interesting approach to your topics. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, Boonie
three stunning Haikus,
ReplyDeleteeach highlights a theme, what a breath taking creation, my dear poet.
you tickle me with your dedication and soaring talent here.
cheers.
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/
here is one of my entries,
a poetry award 4 you and thank you for your support on week 9 potluck fun.
Enjoy!
xxx
wonderful haikus, kudos! Much said in so few words . Taj Mahal my favourite.
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Luke @ WordSalad
(mine are here -
http://wp.me/pTeVg-cx
http://wp.me/pTeVg-cP
Pyaara Dost,
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wah! Taj!
The moonlit night and love........
Beautiful.........
All the three haikus are lovely.
Wishing you a lovely night,
Sasneham,
Anu
Three beautiful haiku's written well
ReplyDeletelovely haikus.
ReplyDeletewonderful thinking ramesh..
ReplyDeleteI love your perspective, so well done;)
ReplyDeleteLoved the first and last ones. You have used the haikus perfectly to describe yet also 'hide' something about these places.
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I feel your eyes in these haiku. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI really love the thought behind your Haiku, so peaceful "Foot print to follow" very prophetic!
ReplyDeleteYou covered it all, brilliantly..thanks!!
ReplyDeleteI love your interplay between man and building, moon and building, then man and moon. You handle great achievements with such humble grace and simplicity. Nice Haiku!
ReplyDeleteWonderful Haiku one and all. Well done my friend.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
A good string of thoughts. Effective words.I loved it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku - separately or together. Lovely!
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