Friday, November 26, 2010

HI ...Haikus for HMH





On his off day, Moon
Visits earth, finds himself in
My Haikus, wonders..



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A mad Butterfly
Rests on rose’s shadow; love
Finds it Colorful..



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9 comments:

  1. Very beautiful haikus Sir...
    The first one is simply awesome... :)

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  2. I like both Haikus, Ramesh. I enjoy the self-referencing you do occasionally in your haikus with relation to the natural world--the moon in particular. I like the second haiku because it paints the illusory nature of love "rests on rose's shadow." At least that is what I got from it--the shadow is as colorful as the real thing. Nice work. Thanks for your kind comment.
    Namaste,
    Noelle

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  3. Rameshji!! the Moon wonders if you would enjoy a tête-à-tête meal at a café :) especially since she is visiting the earth :D

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  4. Is the moon enlightened by mere earthlings meanderings I wonder?
    You will have to let me know?

    I love your vision.

    Sue x

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  5. A mad Butterfly
    Rests on rose’s shadow; love
    Finds it Colorful..

    Picturesque.

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  6. @foxysue

    Is the moon enlightened by mere earthlings meanderings I wonder?
    You will have to let me know

    Thanks for your visit on my page and your comment which I have reproduced here.. well my answer..

    Who Knows.. but every thing is possible in world of thoughts..every thing..so why not..
    Well my thanks for truly being there and contemplating and enquiring.. that's how the world of bautiful thoughts would expand..Let us continue to practice Happiness.. Don't forget to visit tomorrow.. it SUNDAY.. OSI DAY.. I will be pouring my heart out..

    @Nanka

    In India Moon is referred to as HE.. so not really tempted for a sit in cafe..ha, ha, anyways love your humour and for really enjoying the haiku..

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  7. i too enjoy your conversations with moon, stars, shadows and flowers.
    you have a lovely way of giving personality to the natural world.
    very charming,
    as is your peace filled nature.

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  8. Oh the first one fills me with delight. I can just imagine Mr. Moon, finding himself reflected in your words, scratching his head in amazement.

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  9. love the idea of the moon visiting on his day off, and a mad butterfly... two visions i shall carry around for awhile... thank you,

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