Thursday, October 13, 2011

Dreams Spilling From My Eyes..



Written for the photo prompt of blubell books...




Dreams floating behind
Your closed eyes, and spilling
From mine,  are they same..

RS : )
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14 comments:

  1. MorningOctober 13, 2011 at 7:57 AM

    short and lovely.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  2. MorningOctober 13, 2011 at 7:57 AM

    short and lovely.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 13, 2011 at 8:13 AM

    we love to imagine that we are so like our children, but are we? we won't know, for real, until we, let go, let them become adults and choose for themselves.

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  4. keiths ramblingsOctober 13, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    What a lovely idea!

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  5. The Noiseless CuckooclockOctober 13, 2011 at 11:35 AM

    amazing idea.

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  6. Vinay Leo R.October 13, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Maybe, maybe not :) But the little one's dreams count a lot more I feel! Lovely take!

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  7. Someone is SpecialOctober 13, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    RS, lovely haiku.. very cute sleep and I wish the little one's dream should be fulfilled..

    Someone is Special

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  8. RosieOctober 14, 2011 at 4:39 AM

    Beautifully put... and does it really matter? I love that photo - your words are wonderful!

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  9. Kim MailhotOctober 14, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    so sweet an image, and so lovely a thought.

    Happy Friday !

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  10. gmaOctober 14, 2011 at 8:39 AM

    Yes, if the dream is to let the little one find and follow his own dreams.

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  11. rebeccaOctober 15, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    oh my gosh ramesh!
    i have forever longed for you to add photos to your wondrous haiku. yes, your haiku always have the ability to paint images. i am just such a visual person i love the added experience of using my eyes.
    this is so touching and full of the human experience.

    thank you for gracing my moment!

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  12. KayOctober 16, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    I wonder if you both dream of heaven. This poem is so lovely. I'm happy to have read it. Thank you!

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  13. Ann LeFloreOctober 18, 2011 at 4:08 PM

    short and filled with love
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/17/to-my-son/

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  14. HelenaOctober 20, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    Succinct and sweet. You do wonder what goes on in their little minds.

    Thanks for the Haiku.

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