Saturday, October 29, 2011

Setting Sun Faking to Be the Afternoon Sun..

Written for One Single Impression Prompt : Sunset
Thanks to Kremo of The Obtuse Angle for the prompt




Sink With Me...


"Sink with me to come
Out of depths,” said the setting Sun
And I just sank with it
Coming out of depths could be fun...

( From my book “A Little More Than Ordinary”)


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Setting Sun Faking to
Be the Afternoon Sun..
 

I was trying to
Look at the blazing
Afternoon Sun
And lo, suddenly it vanished
Fell directly into the sea
And it was hush
Of the evening
Shocked I couldn't understand
And then as if
The winds whispered
In my ears, " Hey, that was
Setting Sun faking to be
The Afternoon Sun
Wasn't able to face the truth
So kept on trying
To shine in vain
Fighting with the nature."
And for just this folly
The world around
Got deprived of a soothing,
Tranquil and peaceful
Transition of the day
Into a glorious evening...
 
 
 
RS :)
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18 comments:

  1. NankaOctober 29, 2011 at 10:21 PM

    Gorgeous lure of the setting sun!! Nicely done!!

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  2. Tammie LeeOctober 29, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    sink to come out of the depths is a new thought, I like it.

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  3. Harshad MehtaOctober 30, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    May everyone have a glorious EVENING.

    A wonderful piece.

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  4. vivinfranceOctober 30, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    I love sunsets and yours are beautiful.

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  5. anthonynorthOctober 30, 2011 at 1:40 AM

    Loved the metaphor in that.

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  6. Lisa at GreenbowOctober 30, 2011 at 2:55 AM

    The setting sun draws up so many thoughts, feelings.

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  7. GeraldineOctober 30, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    I found it very soothing, reading your second poem. Nice work!

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  8. LeoviOctober 30, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    The sunset is one of the moments that I like the day. but it takes so little ... often take the light for photos.

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  9. JimOctober 30, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    Those're goodones
    ..

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  10. AnonymousOctober 30, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    very nice..,!

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  11. Jingle PoetryOctober 30, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    you never disappoint.

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/happy-halloween-special-poetry-potluck.html

    one of your Halloween entry from last year is featured at my post today,

    check it out.

    welcome back any time this week by Thursday.

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  12. Jingle PoetryOctober 30, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    you never disappoint.

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/happy-halloween-special-poetry-potluck.html

    one of your Halloween entry from last year is featured at my post today,

    check it out.

    welcome back any time this week by Thursday.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 31, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    Wonderful write, a superb title to go with it! :)

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  14. KremoOctober 31, 2011 at 6:28 AM

    oh, i know, coming out of the depths is insane fun !!!! very well done !
    And you more than did justice to the prompt.

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  15. MorningNovember 2, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    love the natural flow of your words,

    elegant words in sunset.

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  16. Brother OllieNovember 4, 2011 at 5:07 AM

    you paint a vivid picture

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  17. EllaNovember 4, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    I love the idea of Fool's gold in this form~

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  18. WyomingDivaNovember 4, 2011 at 11:11 PM

    Enjoyed this - esp. the reminder that one's choices and behaviors affect others whether they wish it or not.

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