Friday, October 7, 2011

Stars all go to sleep


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..

Stars all go to sleep



Stars all go to sleep
Dawn arrives, listening to
Silence of sunrise…

Morning’s music hits
My ears, mind picks up the notes
Lo, heart starts dancing…

God spreads another
Day; appears smooth, I walk on,
Joyous angels join


Life quietly sails through
Morning, noon and evening
Moon and stars return..

Sky glitters, night 
Long celebration, tired Moon,
Stars all go to sleep..



RS : )
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15 comments:

  1. GrammyOctober 7, 2011 at 3:34 AM

    That was beautiful Ramesh, Just stopped by to say have a wonderful day. Namaste Grammy E

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  2. A Bit of the BlarneyOctober 7, 2011 at 4:32 AM

    Lovely!!! I especially like this verse:

    Morning’s music hits
    My ears, mind picks up the notes
    Lo, heart starts dancing…

    Have a wonderful day! Cathy

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 7, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    It sounds like a wondrous day from beginning to end, Ramesh--a day that each of us should have at least once a week! Blessings.

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  4. NankaOctober 7, 2011 at 5:23 AM

    Beautiful RS!! You are so positive and lively from dawn to dusk!! You don't even get tired like the Moon!! :) "Stars all go to sleep" The first and last line too, just proves that the earth goes round!! ;)
    Cheers RS!!

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  5. rebeccaOctober 7, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    i love the circle of your lovely words. thank you for placing all of us firmly in the center of your generous light!

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  6. Kim MailhotOctober 7, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    This is a beautiful celebration of the Day ! In joy, the circle !

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  7. RosieOctober 7, 2011 at 8:22 AM

    How lovely and soothing your words are Ramesh! Thanks for sharing...=)

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  8. CherylOctober 7, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    I enjoyed your haiku. I particularly like the idea of stars going to sleep.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    I enjoy your story telling in Haiku!

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  10. Judith WesterfieldOctober 7, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    Lovely, lovely lovely

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  11. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    You've poemed the meaning of life
    so well, Ramesh.

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  12. tamiOctober 8, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    such s beautiful poem of life, and love!

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  13. MeriOctober 8, 2011 at 7:35 AM

    Beautiful and affirming.

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  14. gmaOctober 8, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    Too bad all do not see their days as smooth. Love the gentleness here.

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  15. Susie ClevengerOctober 13, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    Beautiful inspiration...we should all listen and look for the beauty around us...thanks for your lovely words

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