Saturday, October 22, 2011

His Heart Made of Sponge..



Writeen for Haiku Heights Prompt: Sponge


Hey, be like a sponge,
You must soak everything, that
Will take you ahead..

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His heart, made of sponge,
Soaked everything; bounced
One day, went ahead...


RS : )

11 comments:

  1. I love the metaphor!
    "A heart made of sponge" ...What a wonderful image.

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  2. Both life affirming. Enjoyed them.

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  3. bounced, a great creative thought in this single word.. good.

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  4. Yes, it will take us far. Enjoyed the meaningful set of haiku ~

    Happy weekend ~

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  5. A guide to progress, and so true too!!

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  6. http://judithwesterfield.wordpress.com/2011/10/22/live-and-let-liver-dr-oz-knows/

    Ramesh,
    Your soak is much healthier than mine!
    J.
    P.s. I added a haiku to my last post.

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  7. Nicely, and they say that if you soak up too much booze, it'll go straight to your head!

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  8. Love how your mind works ... very clever!

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