Thursday, October 27, 2011

Thousands of Bubbles Shine..

Haiku
Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart.

and for Blue Bell Books
based on the picture prompt ...



First for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart


My hands full of soap
Thousands of bubbles shine, ah
A whole universe

A gush of water
Bubbles get washed away
A universe goes..

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And now for Blue Bell Books


A lovely world this
God give me shining wings too
Want to hop on trees..

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And one in a lighter vain..

Fruits tempted me, yes
But how do I get down now
Can't fall like a fruit..


RS :)
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16 comments:

  1. RosieOctober 28, 2011 at 4:14 AM

    Love your playful haikus Ramesh! I'd use the vines to climb back down... 'o)

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  2. A Bit of the BlarneyOctober 28, 2011 at 4:42 AM

    Somedays I would really like to sit in the treetops and watch. But alas I have a fear of height. I too would wonder how I would get down!!! Have a wonderful weekend!! Cathy

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  3. somepinkflowersOctober 28, 2011 at 7:24 AM

    enjoy this image-->
    A whole universe
    in a bubble...

    does it make you think
    WE are on a bubble
    here
    on
    earth?

    not the Bad Way
    as it may burst any moment;
    but the Good Way
    as we float about carefree...

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  4. anthonynorthOctober 28, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    Enjoyed all four.

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  5. NankaOctober 28, 2011 at 7:50 AM

    Nice ones with great imagery!! A bad phase in life and our bubble bursts to wash away all our hopes desires!! But you can always blow more bubbles and set them free!!

    Coming fro HMH!!

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  6. Helen CampbellOctober 28, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    I love your playful haiku. Thanks for brightening my day!

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  7. AnonymousOctober 28, 2011 at 8:22 AM

    I enjoy your haiku stories and the image that the universe is floating in a bubble.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 28, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    That second haiku is nice, so mildly amusing!
    Jamie.

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  9. Susie ClevengerOctober 28, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    How innocent the joy of watching bubbles...love the joy coming from your haiku...they made me smile

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  10. The Orange TreeOctober 28, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    being blessed to have wings and fly is cool.

    fabulous write.

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  11. rebeccaOctober 28, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    dear ramesh,
    i love thinking of whole universes in tiny grains of sand...so your bubble world delights me greatly!
    i look forward to your clever haiku every friday!

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  12. Fran aka RedondowriterOctober 28, 2011 at 8:48 PM

    Your haikus are always insightful. I like the bubbles and the universe. I also like your portrait on the sidebar. You look like a knowing scholar.

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  13. Kim MailhotOctober 29, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    Thank you for the playful haiku. Let us focus on the gifts of this day we have been given.
    Peace to you !

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  14. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 30, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    I can see you washing your hands with lots of soap just to conjure up ten thousand universes!


    Haiku your heart here or here

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  15. e.a.s. demersOctober 31, 2011 at 11:59 PM

    Very lovely haiku's :-)

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  16. pure2coreNovember 2, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    Superb..verses...Thanks for share ...

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