Monday, March 5, 2012

Eighth Sin, That!!



Written for Jingle Poetry at Olive Garden..


Eighth Sin , That!


Oh, he doesn't know
anything about seven sins;
bliss or eighth sin?


RS:)

2 comments:

  1. Like the sound of it read aloud, but not sure I follow the meaning. Are you suggesting that bliss is a sin too?

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  2. JUST TAKE THE QUESTION MARK OUT AND THEN IT'S CLEAR TO ME.
    MOST PEOPLE ARE SO FAR PAST THE 8TH TRYING TO FIND BLISS THAT THEY CAN'T EVEN REMEMBER THE 7TH!

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