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HAIKU
Written for One Single Impression
Written for One Single Impression
Prompt: Underground
Tombs of Attraction
Underground tunnels;
I try to find a way out
of maze of my mind..
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Buried underground
ancient kings still weild power;
tombs of attraction
RS:)
Shallow waters run deep....sir, but your poetic essence is far more deeper.......
ReplyDeletewell written..
ReplyDeleteThe last stanza (or haiku, or whatever I should call it) made me immediately think of both Indiana Jones and the Mummy-movies... Which is really good!!! *smile* Well painted picture!
ReplyDeleteThe second is heroic, I love it. The first is thoughtful, I can feel your pondering.
ReplyDeleteMaze of mind. Excellent expression.
ReplyDeleteMyth and mind are subjects I always enjoy. Especially the maze connection.
ReplyDeleteA nice duo!
ReplyDeleteTwo wonderful haikus. You've woven so much through your short poems. Nicely written Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteThat maze is the hardest to escape...
ReplyDeleteVery nice haikus!
Best, M.
I would get clostraphobia down in those tunnels. I doublt the ancient king could help much with that.
ReplyDeleteWe have a pedestrian tunnel system under ground in Houston. It goes for miles and has shops and restaurants, etc, all along.
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Why are we so attracted to dead kings? (It's a question I can't answer!)
ReplyDeleteUnderground Streams
The maze is too complex difficult to find a way out.. time still hold the answers
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