Written for One single Impression
Prompt: Transition
thanks to Ragged Glory for the prompt..
Quiet Transition..
Mango ripens
uneventfully;
quiet transition..
Quiet transition;
a mild crack appears
as it falls down
As it falls down,
a little one grabs it;
a smile grows
A smile grows
waiting for some more;
Mango ripens
A smile grows
waiting for some more;
Mango ripens
excellent loop!
ReplyDeleteflawless transition i may say.
Beautiful transitions.
ReplyDeleteSweet transitions!
ReplyDeleteFrom one mango to another--delicious!
ReplyDeleteSo true. The mango is always a sweet awakening.
ReplyDeleteI liked the flow of this poem, and it's unique as well.
ReplyDeleteNot a crack in your micro-transitions ;-)
ReplyDeleteKudos Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and so logical :-)
ReplyDeleteBest, M.
Excellent flow in a style that is unique of you!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
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