Sunday, March 25, 2012

Quiet Transition..




Written for One single Impression

 
Prompt: Transition
thanks to Ragged Glory for the prompt..

Quiet Transition..

Mango ripens
uneventfully;
quiet transition..

Quiet transition;
a mild crack appears
 as it falls down

As it falls down,
a little one grabs it;
a smile grows

A smile grows
waiting for some more;
Mango ripens


11 comments:

  1. excellent loop!

    flawless transition i may say.

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  2. So true. The mango is always a sweet awakening.

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  3. I liked the flow of this poem, and it's unique as well.

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  4. Not a crack in your micro-transitions ;-)

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  5. Beautiful and so logical :-)
    Best, M.

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  6. Excellent flow in a style that is unique of you!

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