Saturday, March 31, 2012

Eager Child..



Written for Haiku Heights April Challenge..
It's 0012 hrs..First April in India..



Prompt : Eager

Eager Child

Cut the cake
Or write a haiku;
eager child

Eager child
hides deep inside me;
quite quietly

Quite quietly
celebrates with both;
my birthday

My birthday;
ah, smiley clock strikes
midnight hour

Midnight hour
and the challenge starts;
cut the cake..

RS:)
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16 comments:

  1. TeresaMarch 31, 2012 at 12:06 PM

    We all have that little child inside us when it comes to celebrations! Good job of capturing that mood.

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  2. Someone is SpecialMarch 31, 2012 at 12:29 PM

    Cut the cake Rameshji.. Wish you a very Happy Birthday...!

    Celebrations!
    cut the cake with a smile and
    dance to the tune

    dance to the tune
    hug and spread the happiness
    enjoy your birthday

    enjoy your birthday
    "May your dreams come true" and yes
    Celebrations!

    Someone is Special

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  3. Bruce MillerMarch 31, 2012 at 1:57 PM

    Great writing! Cut the cake indeed!

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  4. GraceMarch 31, 2012 at 2:41 PM

    Cut the cake, blow the candles ~

    Happy birthday and great to see here ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html

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  5. ElleceeMarch 31, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    Enjoy your special birthday. Love your birthday haiku. What a great start.

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 31, 2012 at 3:47 PM

    Cut the cake, of course, but don't cut out the haiku! :)

    Eager to Write Haiku

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  7. KarenMarch 31, 2012 at 4:11 PM

    I cut my birthday cake and wrote a haiku today as well Ramesh! Happy birthday to you too!

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  8. carol l mckennaMarch 31, 2012 at 5:29 PM

    Happy Birthday? ~ speaks to the 'inner child' in all of us ~ well written ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. Maude LynnMarch 31, 2012 at 6:10 PM

    So joyful!

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  10. Ramesh SoodMarch 31, 2012 at 8:37 PM

    Thanks to all my friends here for your birthday wishes... I feel happier and enhanced.. love.. RS:)

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  11. Sri ValliMarch 31, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    Lovely set of haiku :) Yes, we all have child in us...Once again, Happy Birthday :)

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  12. AmityApril 1, 2012 at 4:56 AM

    C'mon cut the cake now RS! :-)

    I wish you could have a taste of my specialty cakes...you are just too far to place an order ;-)

    Beautiful rendition of the prompt, i like that "eager child inside of us"...:)

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  13. zongrikApril 1, 2012 at 10:38 AM

    happy birthday, again

    in the dragon's nest

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  14. Vinay Leo R.April 2, 2012 at 10:18 AM

    Er.. don't remember if I wished you on FB or not.. been busy yesterday :) Anyways, happy birthday, Rameshji.. and I hope you cut the cake AND wrote the haiku too :)

    Cheers!

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    1. Ramesh SoodApril 2, 2012 at 11:54 AM

      Yes, Leo I cut the cake..well you appeared to have found the taste in haiku.. :)

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  15. UnknownApril 10, 2012 at 6:26 AM

    Thanks for sharing. Love the images your haikus bring to my mind's eye.

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