Friday, August 10, 2012

Ah, I Close My Eyes..


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..



Ah, I Close My Eyes..


All my dreams fall with
a swish of her eyelashes;
ah, I close my eyes

ah, I close my eyes;
illuminous stars sparkle
in my inner sky

( Second one is inspired by Rebecca's Haiku..)

RS:)
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8 comments:

  1. joanneAugust 10, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    I floated through this stunning haiku....

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  2. Priti LisaAugust 10, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    beautiful with a hint of melancholy ♥♥

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  3. LeaAugust 10, 2012 at 4:21 PM

    Each word a star... so beautiful these haiku seen behind closed eyes...

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  4. gmaAugust 10, 2012 at 5:43 PM

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  5. rebeccaAugust 10, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    dear ramesh,

    your offerings are pure star dust! thank you for being here as loyal as the sun each week sharing your beauty.

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 10, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    Good day Ramesh, nice one. Greatly balanced and a wonderful read.

    Namaste

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  7. Amrit SinhaAugust 11, 2012 at 5:01 AM

    Beautiful words :-)

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  8. AnonymousAugust 12, 2012 at 8:27 PM

    oh you write HAIKU.....awesome :)

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