Written for
One Single Impression..
Prompt: Lopsided..
Lopsided Movement Forward..
Ah, how beautiful
Is this world of thoughts
I go beyond death too
What a freedom,
Chitchatting with Moon
And Stars and then
Saying goodnight to God
Who sits next to me
Watching and knowing
As I remove my wings
Keep them folded
Under my pillow
To wear them again
For a free flight
to the unknown
Slowly slipping into
Deep slumber
Immune to lopsided
Movement forward...
I choose my own
Speed and direction
In my own world of thoughts
oh, how beautiful..
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And I attempt a Haiku format too....... :)
Lopsided
movement forward ;
tilted life..
RS:)
Ooh good one! I like the idea of removing wings until the next adventure. Beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteAnd a beautiful message.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of folding wings and keeping it under pillow! So beautiful world it is - world of fantasy!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed your haibun style presentation
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Lovely piece ... enjoyed it :-)
ReplyDeleteworld of fantasy and faith!
ReplyDeleteNice thoughts, Ramesh. We must be careful that the Green Movement does not get to much power.
ReplyDelete..
surreal and dream-like.....very lovely verse....
ReplyDeleteworld of thoughts..it seems beautiful..:)
ReplyDeleteSimple and beautiful.. Especially the following part :)
ReplyDeleteAs I remove my wings
Keep them folded
Under my pillow
To wear them again
For a free flight
to the unknown
As I remove my wings
Keep them folded
Under my pillow
To wear them again
For a free flight
to the unknown
You are such a prolific poet and I love your haiku!Beautiful works!
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira