Saturday, August 18, 2012

Lopsided Movement Forward..




Written for
One Single Impression..

Prompt: Lopsided..

Lopsided Movement Forward..


Ah, how beautiful
Is this world of thoughts
I go beyond death too
What a freedom,
Chitchatting with Moon
And Stars and then
Saying goodnight to God
Who sits next to me
Watching and knowing
As I remove my wings
Keep them folded
Under my pillow
To wear them again
For a free flight
to the unknown
Slowly slipping into
Deep slumber
Immune to lopsided
Movement forward...
I choose my own
Speed and direction
In my own world of thoughts
oh, how beautiful..

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And I attempt a Haiku format too....... :)


Lopsided
movement forward ;
tilted life..


RS:)

11 comments:

  1. Ooh good one! I like the idea of removing wings until the next adventure. Beautiful work.

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  2. I like the idea of folding wings and keeping it under pillow! So beautiful world it is - world of fantasy!

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  3. enjoyed your haibun style presentation


    much love...

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  4. Nice thoughts, Ramesh. We must be careful that the Green Movement does not get to much power.
    ..

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  5. surreal and dream-like.....very lovely verse....

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  6. world of thoughts..it seems beautiful..:)

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  7. Simple and beautiful.. Especially the following part :)
    As I remove my wings
    Keep them folded
    Under my pillow
    To wear them again
    For a free flight
    to the unknown


    As I remove my wings
    Keep them folded
    Under my pillow
    To wear them again
    For a free flight
    to the unknown

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  8. You are such a prolific poet and I love your haiku!Beautiful works!
    Mine is here
    Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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