Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Needy Affair , That..






Prompts: Affair, Free , Expectation

Needy Affair, That!! 

High expectations
of a free gift from her love;
Needy affair, that

Needy affair, that
and the world doesn't  notice;
that's how it happens


RS:)
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6 comments:

  1. Jae RoseAugust 29, 2012 at 10:05 AM

    It's all about the commas in this one Ramesh..made me read several times..need and a blind eye perhaps..a haiku-tastic affair..jae ;)

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  2. ApptechvizAugust 29, 2012 at 11:22 AM

    nice bro..

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  3. Sheilagh LeeAugust 29, 2012 at 3:24 PM

    well done Ramesh

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  4. AnonymousAugust 30, 2012 at 5:14 AM

    ramesh, very good, perceptive.

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  5. PratibhaAugust 30, 2012 at 7:51 AM

    Interesting word play and a picture emerges from shadows :)

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  6. Day DreamerAugust 30, 2012 at 4:58 PM

    Well written!

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