Friday, August 31, 2012

Moats of Pride

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Prompt: Drawbridge
( Thanks to Nanka..feels nice to know she follows HH...Nanka, I  miss your haiku..here)

This is beginning of the month….wishing everyone all the best..pray that we are able to contribute everyday.

Thanks Leo....for the opportunity...

 
Moats of Pride
 
Moats of pride
all around her heart;
no drawbridge..

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Well, just to remember all the fun an year ago...
 
Ant's  castle;
Eleph fears crossing
weak drawbridge...
 
RS :)

Shared with Rebecca' Haiku My Heart.

27 comments:

  1. ' Moats of pride' does really say something a lot.

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  2. I love the Ant's castle. What a funny image.

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  3. Ant's castle would really be something cute :-)

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  4. Yes, I miss Nanka as well!

    I love the visual with this Haiku. No bridge to cross into her heart. Makes me lonely.

    Peace

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  5. "Moats of pride" I like these words. We so often create those. I enjoyed both of these haiku very much.

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  6. Good day Ramesh, what a wonderful haiku you have written here for haiku My heart and for the first day of September Heights. Really the one you have enclosed about the Ant's Castle is awesome too.
    Have a wonderful September Heights ... and please drop by on my blog.

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  7. Moats of pride...that really draws a picture of lonliness.

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  8. Moats of pride is an inspired phrase!

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  9. Great haiku, the imagery is very potent... However, I think that you are a magician with words and could find a way in... thought of you this week and hope you have continued to heal and have done well after your bicycle encounter last Friday.

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  10. An inspiring bridge :)

    Rgds,

    Parminder :)

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  11. I love both your haiku but the first one is really stunning!

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  12. I adore the first... came with such a deep meaning... truly zen like...

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  13. Ants Castle? Rameshji.. I love your Haiku..

    Someone is Special

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  14. Moats of Pride is really outstanding!

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  15. oh thats good very good I love how were it's all in our own way

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  16. Loved the first one Ramesh G ..
    good one !!

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  17. love your words....she is unapproachable....the ants have built castles in my walkways...

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  18. Nice set, Ramesh. Your first haiku is like a different view of mine, but my lady's moat is filled with soething else.

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  19. my love to the beautiful Nanka too!!!

    you haiku is remarkable in image and profound in meaning.

    welcome to September Ramesh. so glad to walk the seasons with you.

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  20. Are we going to see more of Ant and Elph?
    DrawBridge

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  21. Truly foolish pride makes it hard to let someone in. Nice haiku.

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